Saturday, January 28, 2012

Haiku Heights "Crimson"

This weeks prompt "crimson" is (again) a tough one. What can I do with this prompt? Well I have to try of course so here I ga:

the day has gone
crimson clouds touching
the wild waves

highlighted crimson
the raspberry in my garden
late summer

ah! that color
the deepest red I ever saw
her new robe

in the frontyard
the young roses blooming
the deepest red

Sincerely,
op

10 comments:

  1. anthonynorthJanuary 28, 2012 at 4:24 PM

    Many different perspectives of crimson. Nicely done.

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  2. Susie ClevengerJanuary 28, 2012 at 8:22 PM

    I love your take on crimson..I especially like the first one.

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  3. KarenJanuary 28, 2012 at 10:00 PM

    A terrific series of haiku. I really like the first one.

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  4. Vinay Leo R.January 29, 2012 at 4:31 AM

    I like that first, very much so.. Could see the clouds moving past the ocean at sunset! :)

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  5. AmberJanuary 29, 2012 at 8:08 PM

    Each one stirred up vivid images in my mind. Nicely written! :)

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  6. the criticsJanuary 30, 2012 at 8:42 AM

    i liked the first too .nice

    here is mine[

    http://thealchemycritics.blogspot.com/2012/01/lifes-simple-realities-crimson.html

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  7. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryFebruary 1, 2012 at 1:03 AM

    very sharp story telling.

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  8. Magical Mystical TeacherFebruary 1, 2012 at 2:30 AM

    Now that I've caught a glimpse of that succulent raspberry in your garden, I think I'll have a bite!


    Boy in Crimson

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  9. beccagivensFebruary 2, 2012 at 4:34 AM

    Another star set ~~ Beautiful!!

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  10. SarahFebruary 4, 2012 at 10:29 AM

    I like the image of the second one in this series

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