Saturday, February 4, 2012

Bluebell's Short story slam

For the short story slam week 20  I wrote the following short story in 55 words:

WINTER FEELING

A wondrous place. Trees and streets covered with snow. The bright sunlight. Roofs like crystal.
Love is warming our bodies in front of the fireplace.Drinking red wine, eating marshmallows. This is paradise.
Our legs intwined. Lost in each others eyes. Together you and I.

making love
in front of the fireplace -
winter feeling





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5 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 4, 2012 at 3:14 PM

    super creative, wow.

    a story plus a Haiku, 55 word.

    brilliant!

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  2. MagyarFebruary 4, 2012 at 5:44 PM

    __Very warm feeling here; too, I like your recent posts at WHW.
    __To comlpiment (or complement) those butterfly haiku / haibun, this:

    butterfly
    floats on the warming air
    noon sun

    Always, _m

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  3. ChèvrefeuilleFebruary 5, 2012 at 10:35 AM

    The Purple and Magyar thank you so much for these kind words. And ... Magyar thank you for the beautiful haiku.

    Namaste

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  4. paulo guimaraesFebruary 12, 2012 at 11:05 PM

    Beautiful imagery, I can feel the warmth of the fire and the radiance of two hearts together as one.

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  5. ElizenaFebruary 23, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    I loved this. It was creative, passionate, loving and warm. I could feel the warmth of the flames on my skin and feelings of peace and security. Very well done. Be blessed.

    http://elizena-lovingmycreator.blogspot.com/2012/02/soul-song.html

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