Thursday, February 23, 2012

The Haiku Challenge, day 23



Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 23 – February 23rd – Theme: Joy of Giving Form: (ABC, CDE, EFA) - Haiku

Another haiku form I am not so familiar with. I have read some of these on Ramesh's weblog. I love this form, so this is a real challenge for me. But I have to try before I die :-) (just a proverb people use here in The Netherlands).

Joy of Giving
wonderful verses of the Far East
a haiku addict

a haiku addict
writing every day again
verses of nature

verses of nature
every season it's own words
all through the year



all through the year
I enjoy giving my haiku
to the world

to the world
I only can say 'haiku is great'
join the fun

join the fun
throwing snowballs in the street
a child's play


Also contributed to: Thursday Poets Rally

Thursday Poets Rally


Thank you for being here and make your comments on these new haiku.

Sincerely,


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20 comments:

  1. ElleceeFebruary 23, 2012 at 2:30 AM

    I enjoy your Haiku so much. Almost addicted.

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  2. AsniFebruary 23, 2012 at 4:31 AM

    I can see your passion for haiku. Inspiring!

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  3. boogulooFebruary 23, 2012 at 5:18 AM

    Enjoyed the moments.

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  4. Cloaked Monk/TerriFebruary 23, 2012 at 6:31 AM

    This one made me laugh!!

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  5. Gemma Wiseman aka Pamela AdamsFebruary 23, 2012 at 7:49 AM

    It's so easy to become a haiku addict! Lovely way to spin a moment!

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  6. JANUFebruary 23, 2012 at 8:36 AM

    Nice ...Haiku is challenging.

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  7. Ramesh SoodFebruary 23, 2012 at 12:00 PM

    Good one.. you know when I tried this style first time... someone called them dancing verses..I don't know but Haiku indeed becomes an addiction..but to reach out to the hearts of people is difficult.. you appear to be achieving it without much effort..

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  8. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallFebruary 23, 2012 at 3:35 PM

    charming haiku,

    your thoughts shine.

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  9. AnonymousFebruary 23, 2012 at 3:55 PM

    incredible humor..

    :)

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  10. Sri ValliFebruary 23, 2012 at 4:21 PM

    Wow...Lovely flow....Loved your haiku :)
    Thanks for sharing :)

    A burning candle

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  11. Vidya SuryFebruary 23, 2012 at 6:37 PM

    Chevrefeuille, very enjoyable read. :-) Clearly you've done a great job! :-)

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  12. AnonymousFebruary 23, 2012 at 6:45 PM

    Very nice set ... if I understand this particular form (certainly not my forte) the last line should be the repeat of the first line (the beginning line). I need more practice ... Ramesh is the master among us! :)

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  13. KarenFebruary 23, 2012 at 7:18 PM

    Excellent series of haiku! I am addicted too!

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  14. NehaFebruary 24, 2012 at 3:16 AM

    Good one, Thanks for the idea, even I'll write a haiku using this format :)

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  15. Someone is SpecialFebruary 24, 2012 at 10:53 PM

    you always amaze me with your words.. Thanks for this joy!

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  16. rchFebruary 25, 2012 at 1:12 PM

    Very nice string of haikus, very clever how you carried a line from one to the next.

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  17. Mark ButkusFebruary 25, 2012 at 6:21 PM

    Thank you for introducing me to a new form of haiku.

    Cheers,

    Mark Butkus

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  18. Belva Rae StaplesFebruary 28, 2012 at 7:32 PM

    These are very well done!

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  19. dakshiFebruary 29, 2012 at 3:15 PM

    Nice work....

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  20. AnonymousMarch 2, 2012 at 2:23 PM

    Nicely positive. Enjoyed!

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