Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 6 – February 6th – Theme or Word: Think Form: Haiku & Pi-Ku
Haiku I write since the late eighties, but I haven't heard about Pi-ku so that's a challenge already. Of course I have to try Pi-ku. Maybe it doesn't work, so forgive me.
Rodin's Thinker
stands alone and forgotten
overgrown by Ivy
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| Credits: The Thinker |
The Thinker
alone
no more thoughts
Until tomorrow
The Pi-Ku is wonderful.
ReplyDeleteAlso the haiku is whimsical.
I enjoyed reading it. :)
ReplyDeleteNice! I enjoyed reading it too.
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This blog is from my other account at Blogger.)
It doesn't allow anyone other than from blogger to send comments. Perhaps there are others from wordpress who wants to comment but could not because they do not have blogger account. (I think)
Well done ... leaving me to ponder my thoughts ;)
ReplyDeleteHappy Week!!
(agree with Asni -- blogger is giving me fits over the past couple of weeks)
Nice haiku/piku - even though beating the syllable counts. Somehow that doesn't matter if the right haiku spirit is there.
ReplyDeleteIt's possible for a Wordpress blogger to comment on Blogger blogs
but only by dogged persistence. (see my today's Blast Blogger post at http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com
I think you did a great job with both haiku and pi-ku
ReplyDeleteYeah, good thinking!
ReplyDeleteI never thought The Thinker could run out of thoughts...but why not?
ReplyDeleteIf Cacti Could Think
You present a truth here, the poor thinker,lost in the past. And thought has run stagnant. You have helped his cause with these poems.
ReplyDeleteThank you all for the kind words. This pi-ku, it isn't really my style of haiku, but I liked to try that style.
ReplyDeleteAs I can read from your comments I didn't fail the pi-ku. :)
I loved your Pi-ku a lot.. :-)
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