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This blog is about haiku. A classical haiku counts 5-7-5 syllables. Chèvrefeuille (the pseudonym of Kristjaan Panneman, a Dutch haiku poet) however writes his haiku in the Kanshicho-style. In the Kanshicho-style the classical syllable count isn't used. Matsuo Basho (1644-1694), a haiku poet, wrote his haiku in Kanshicho-style for several years, but he returned to the classical way of haiku writing. !!! Anonymous comments will be seen as SPAM !!!.
Oh, I think so too! Lovely haiku! I like the music of mother earh!
ReplyDeleteDefinitely a success... and a beautiful musical one at that!
ReplyDeleteI think you've succeeded too. Aren't cherry blossoms so gorgeous. Nature plays the best music of all, doesn't she? :)
ReplyDeleteVery lovely cascading haiku...I like the singing of cicadas and cherry blossoms blooming ~
ReplyDeleteSee you at HH ~
I totally agree that you have succeeded with your quest. I love the haiku. They speak directly of the music of the Sacred Earth Mother. Grand job!
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Your "emerging" is a beautiful lapse into simplicity :)
ReplyDeleteYes, nature's coming alive. A good time of year.
ReplyDeleteYou do write lovely haiku ~ your passion shows you love to do this ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
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imagimation
imagination;
lovely music
ah,holds me here..
RS:)
Lovely Haiku song ♥♥♥
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku Chevrefueille.
ReplyDeleteYes, there is music in and between every word of your haiku... I hear it in the silence that is full of color and sound...
ReplyDeleteExquisite. I love how you (and Ramesh, too) use the last line of one haiku as the first line of the next. Does that form have a name?
ReplyDeleteDear visitors, it makes me humble as I read all your wonderful comments on this blog. Thank you so much.
ReplyDeleteNamaste
The sound of wind and rain always reminds me of my parents home... laying in bed when I was a kid and feeling safe. Your haiku brought back that memory ánd the feeling... thank you! Enjoy your weekend!
ReplyDeleteLovely blending of haiku and music.
ReplyDeletestunningly beautiful imagery evoked as well as the sounds you call to mind. Synesthesia!
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