Another Haiku Heights Saturday. Today the theme is Fate. Not an easy one I think so, but I have to try.
winter departs
the fate of bare branches
getting in bloom
getting in bloom
the cherry tree in my garden
it's her fate
it's her fate
the changing of the seasons
winter departs
Until next week ... for another Haiku Heights ... than the theme is 'childhood'.
Sincerely,
I like the cascading form...nice capture of fate in changing seasons~
ReplyDeleteHave a good day ~
very nice haiku..
ReplyDeleteYou have been busy ~ well composed haiku with welcoming thoughts of Spring ~ Excellent photos ~ for HH and other post with more great haiku and wonderful photos ~ thanks, namaste, carol (A Creative Harbor)
ReplyDeleteI like the form! A great trio.
ReplyDeleteLovely, warming words. Yes, winter is going!
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed the linking threads of thought beginning the haiku! It seems the seasons are not separate entities but connected souls!
ReplyDeletecan't wait till winter is gone
ReplyDeletesenryu of lost soldiers
You are developing your cascading Haiku to a fine detail. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteAh, yes it is her fate, but a beautiful one to see I think! :)
ReplyDeleteExcellant, Well coined Haiku writing. I like all your photos, my best wishes. My enquiries to your family members also.
ReplyDeleteKaa.na.kalyanasundaram, chennai, India.
I enjoyed this cascading haiku very much. And its direction, too. The wheel of life, he ;-) I'm glad we're at the beginning of a beatiful season rigth now, I must admit.
ReplyDeleteBest, M.
Beautiful fate...nice work
ReplyDeleteIt's so nice to read your comments on this weblog item. I love that cascading form and I am trying to make it better.
ReplyDeleteNamaste
I like how you started and ended your series with the same line...very nice. I love the spring...my favorite time of year.
ReplyDelete"the fate of bare branches" is perhaps my favorite line in this series.
ReplyDeleteFate Has Blessed Them