Saturday, May 12, 2012

Haiku Heights, "mask"


This week was very busy. I had to work several late night shifts and I started "Tackle It Tuesday" with the first prompt raindrops. And now another Haiku Heights saturday is on. This weeks prompt mask I enjoyed very much. I have written a new cascading haiku. (Since Ramesh introduced that form I am addicted to it :-) ).

painted face
hides his sad life -
merry-andrew

merry-andrew
every day again
wearing his mask

Credits: merry-andrew

wearing his mask
the surgeon enters the O.R. -
woman in labour

woman in labour
after her caesarean
painted face

Well .... see you next week.
op

15 comments:

  1. carol l mckennaMay 12, 2012 at 1:53 PM

    Wow! Wonderful cascading haiku and fun pic ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

    ReplyDelete
  2. GraceMay 12, 2012 at 2:12 PM

    I like the painted face...nice twist in the end of painted face of woman ~

    Happy day to you ~

    ReplyDelete
  3. Asni /A Walk In My HeartMay 12, 2012 at 2:28 PM

    I think we all wear masks to hide our sadness from others. I like the story you have painted with your haiku.

    ReplyDelete
  4. ChèvrefeuilleMay 12, 2012 at 2:30 PM

    Thank you both for your comments. I myself loved the twist in it. I am glad that it worked out.

    ReplyDelete
  5. anthonynorthMay 12, 2012 at 4:44 PM

    An excellent and deep quartet.

    ReplyDelete
  6. AnonymousMay 12, 2012 at 8:14 PM

    Very nice ~~ nice twists throughout.
    Pink Sandpaper

    ReplyDelete
  7. Frank WatsonMay 13, 2012 at 5:39 AM

    Nice cascading effect. The first one was my favorite, but all were good. The picture somehow reminded me of Ronald McDonald...

    ReplyDelete
  8. kaykualaMay 13, 2012 at 9:47 AM

    Great cascading haiku, Chev! It gives a certain aura around it.Must try it once later!

    Hank

    ReplyDelete
  9. Jaideep RaoMay 14, 2012 at 6:22 AM

    Wow!!,.great cascading haiku!

    ReplyDelete
  10. PranitaMay 14, 2012 at 6:38 AM

    This was an amazing set... loved em al! Well done...
    Truth likes to travel bare feet
    Live once and for all

    ReplyDelete
  11. Sri ValliMay 14, 2012 at 5:55 PM

    Beautiful haiku with so deep meaning.....Loved it :)

    ReplyDelete
  12. PattiKenMay 14, 2012 at 7:43 PM

    This was fun. You do the cascade very well. And great photo!

    ReplyDelete
  13. joanneMay 14, 2012 at 9:01 PM

    Two great takes on mask.....Loved them both

    ReplyDelete
  14. ChèvrefeuilleMay 14, 2012 at 11:18 PM

    Hello dear haiku friends, what a nice comments on my cascading haiku. Brings blushes on my face. All your warm comments make me proud on what I am doing.
    Please enjoy another weeks "Tackle It Tuesday", it's on right now. The prompt is Magnolia. Have fun and share your creativity.

    ReplyDelete
  15. Magical Mystical TeacherMay 16, 2012 at 5:34 PM

    Are there any of us who don't wear masks? I wonder...


    Mask to Hide Your Fear

    ReplyDelete

!!! Anonymous comments will be seen as SPAM and will be deleted !!!