Sunday, September 16, 2012

September Heights, day 17 meadow

Inspired by the theme at


Today the prompt is meadow,  grassland, must be an easy one to write a haiku on. In my country we have great meadows. So let's go do this.

lie down on my back
the perfume of the meadow
makes me drowsy

Well ... do you like this one? See you tomorrow.




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17 comments:

  1. vivinfranceSeptember 17, 2012 at 12:13 AM

    poppies make a good soporific.

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 17, 2012 at 12:32 AM

    I do like this one! I can see the whole scene- relaxed, peaceful

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  3. BarbaraSeptember 17, 2012 at 12:56 AM

    Oh I love this!! You make it look so easy!!

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  4. PattiKenSeptember 17, 2012 at 12:57 AM

    Me too!

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  5. ElleceeSeptember 17, 2012 at 12:57 AM

    I love this haiku of yours. This is something I enjoy doing so much and you picture it perfectly.

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  6. UnknownSeptember 17, 2012 at 2:48 AM

    I love it. I can imagine it.

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  7. Judith WesterfieldSeptember 17, 2012 at 5:09 AM

    Ah yes, lying on your back in a meadow. Such a warm memory you've stirred.

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  8. Vinay Leo R.September 17, 2012 at 6:16 AM

    Ah.. makes me wonder if the perfume made you drowsy so you lay down, or if the perfume became like a lullaby and made you drowsy after you had lied down :) Beautiful.

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  9. odyzzSeptember 17, 2012 at 7:04 AM

    serene and relaxing ..like it :)

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  10. Mariya KolevaSeptember 17, 2012 at 9:17 AM

    oh, yes - I can feel that perfume, too!
    But, Kristjaan, what happened to the Tackle It Tuesday? I am looking for the new prompt for this week, and find it not I do :-D (small Yoda-speak)

    Best, M.

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  11. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 17, 2012 at 3:16 PM

    Sexy little haiku for today, sir!

    No Meadow

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  12. Reading PleasureSeptember 17, 2012 at 3:23 PM

    Ah, a lovely feeling

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  13. TigerbriteSeptember 17, 2012 at 3:30 PM

    Lovely :)

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  14. susanwritespreciseSeptember 17, 2012 at 4:22 PM

    I like this a lot. Very nice

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  15. Sara McNultySeptember 18, 2012 at 5:43 AM

    What is growing in the meadow? Sounds lovely.

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  16. HazelSeptember 18, 2012 at 8:16 AM

    I sniff a sweet-smelling naptime. Wonderful!

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  17. awalkinmyheartSeptember 18, 2012 at 9:27 AM

    How lovely to have the time to lie down in the meadow and just breath its perfume!

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