Tuesday, September 25, 2012

September Heights, day 25 sleep

Inspired by the theme at


Good day to you all, my dear visitors,

Day 25 of September Heights is on, the theme is sleep. I can imagine a few haiku on this theme, so let's go for it and do some haiku composing.

midday nap
a hot summer day break
against the cool wall

 a butterfly
sleeping on a sunflower
shall he have a dream?

 be my friend
blue butterfly on Honeysuckle
I am alone

Source: Blue Butterfly on Sunflower
Well ... almost over this September Heights. 'Till now it was great! Thank you Leo for this treat.


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17 comments:

  1. kaykualaSeptember 25, 2012 at 2:11 AM

    A roving friend can be a shoulder to cry on. They come at the right moment!
    Nicely Kris!

    Hank

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  2. BarbaraSeptember 25, 2012 at 3:04 AM

    The first one is spot on!! Perfect use of the prompt. I love it!!

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  3. ElleceeSeptember 25, 2012 at 3:59 AM

    I enjoyed your haiku today, especially the first one. I would enjoy doing that,,,,

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  4. HazelSeptember 25, 2012 at 4:01 AM

    Ahhh the blue butterfly and honeysuckle are enjoying themselves! Charming lines all.

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  5. Sri ValliSeptember 25, 2012 at 5:15 AM

    Very beautiful haiku set....Just like a beautiful dream!...Loved the way you described midday nap!

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  6. Judith WesterfieldSeptember 25, 2012 at 6:20 AM

    Sleeping on a sunflower - I love the imagery you've created with your words

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  7. knot2shareSeptember 25, 2012 at 6:50 AM

    The first one sounds like i have read it here before too! Or maybe not.

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  8. odyzzSeptember 25, 2012 at 8:23 AM

    wow!! what an enchanting way of expressing the friendship between the two...loved it

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  9. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 25, 2012 at 1:21 PM

    Hi all, thanks for the kind words. To answer you knot2share ... I have written a haiku in Almost the same words on my other weblog on Basho. So it's possible that you've read that.

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  10. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 25, 2012 at 1:30 PM

    Knot2share you can find that post here:

    http://bashorevisited.blogspot.nl/2011/12/basho-revisited-midday-nap.html

    Enjoy the read.

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  11. GraceSeptember 25, 2012 at 2:16 PM

    I like the contrast of summer and cool wall ~ Your last about the blue butterfly is specially lovely ~

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  12. Reading PleasureSeptember 25, 2012 at 2:53 PM

    Lovely set, as usual

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  13. UnknownSeptember 25, 2012 at 4:52 PM

    I love these two. Their attention to detail, even their playfulness . . . reminds me so much of Basho. Bravo!

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  14. PattiKenSeptember 25, 2012 at 4:52 PM

    Nice. The first sounds like a great way to pass a hot afternoon. I love naps.

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  15. joanneSeptember 25, 2012 at 8:20 PM

    a siesta - how inviting.....feeling lonely and being alone are 2 different things - the last one was sad....somehow nature eases the loneliness

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  16. UnknownSeptember 25, 2012 at 10:57 PM

    Nicely done!

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  17. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 29, 2012 at 3:04 PM

    I humbly accept all your kind comments. They make me blush.

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