Inspired by the theme at
Today I have to write a haiku about loneliness I think this will be a tough one. Well ... I contemplated and meditated a little while on this prompt and I came with the following quote of someone (don't ask me, because I don't know the one who said this).
"Loneliness is ... having a wonderful memory and nobody to talk with".
That's loneliness how can I write a haiku on loneliness? I have searched for some inspirational pictures and came up with this picture:
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| Loneliness |
A song by Laura Pausini, Loneliness ...
a lonely flower
my companion for one night -
tears on my pillow
tears on my pillow
I will be dreaming alone
a lonely flower
This one is a re-make of one of my first haiku in English. Well I see you all tomorrow.
Tears on my pillow...How sad!
ReplyDeleteLovely take on the prompt Kristjaan!
"dreaming alone" is very sad... They are both very powerful!
ReplyDeleteYour image of a lone flower is a powerful one!
ReplyDeletethe second set is soooo touching loved it!!!
ReplyDeleteI like the first one best - it says much with little, and paints a picture of loneliness
ReplyDeleteVery lovely and touching...
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku, and great quote for inspiration
ReplyDeleteYou captured the sadness of loneliness! Especially like tears on my pillow ... I've done it a time or two in my life!
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Great inspiration to start Kristjaan!
ReplyDeleteGlad you re-maked one of your first haiku in English! I loved it a lonely flower :)
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