Saturday, March 23, 2013

A Single Leaf, an Impromptu verse



I have written an Impromptu verse ... I saw a single leaf dancing through the streets. It's was a very stormy day today so the last leaves are blown away by that strong wind. But this one single leaf touched me. And I wrote the following haiku on that event:


one single leaf
dances on the shoulder of the wind -
prima ballerina


Isn't it a wonderful little gem? This haiku feels just good and strong. What do you think about this one?


Namaste,

op

5 comments:

  1. joanneMarch 24, 2013 at 2:35 PM

    obviously you were very inspired by that dancing leaf....she does move lightly on the breeze...

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  2. Amrit SinhaMarch 27, 2013 at 4:38 AM

    I loved this image that you wrote about :-)

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  3. Preeti S.March 28, 2013 at 11:34 AM

    Beautiful imagery. A leaf dancing to the beat of the breeze... :)

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  4. MagyarMarch 28, 2013 at 10:10 PM

    Ahhhh... that single leaf that flutters... that spotlit dancer...
    as the others stand by.
    __Very well sensed. _m

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  5. AnonymousApril 20, 2013 at 9:44 AM

    Very lovely!

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