This blog is about haiku. A classical haiku counts 5-7-5 syllables. Chèvrefeuille (the pseudonym of Kristjaan Panneman, a Dutch haiku poet) however writes his haiku in the Kanshicho-style. In the Kanshicho-style the classical syllable count isn't used. Matsuo Basho (1644-1694), a haiku poet, wrote his haiku in Kanshicho-style for several years, but he returned to the classical way of haiku writing. !!! Anonymous comments will be seen as SPAM !!!.
Well I recognise your style in that nice haiku!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done Kristjaan...yes that one painting...
ReplyDeleteA telling and lovely haiku!
ReplyDeleteI can hear them rustling...a beautiful haiku Kristjaan. :-)
ReplyDeleteExcellent response to the prompt...
ReplyDeleteWell done....thanks for sharing
ReplyDeletethe rustling leaves has me curious. REALLY curious.
ReplyDeleteNice Mag.
Love and Light, S
a night's sky
ReplyDeleteswells within this moon's arc
lost canvas
__An instant's humble echo... to your
fine haiku.
__The lost canvas, not painted; the artist knows, he would never duplicate this night's beauty. _m