tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post7421229538055737644..comments2023-10-31T11:07:34.135+01:00Comments on Chèvrefeuille's haiku-blog: Haiku Horizons "sand"Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-57674505818138910722014-04-19T19:59:00.424+02:002014-04-19T19:59:00.424+02:00__Ahh... nicely written, footprints in the "s...__Ahh... nicely written, footprints in the "sand," creating that "well" of collected thought; the tide can hide. A humble echo.<br /><br />this sand traces<br />a herring gulls path<br />rising tide<br /><br />_mMagyarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14834296565844877410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-50944640285603936492014-04-18T01:54:24.605+02:002014-04-18T01:54:24.605+02:00I have not been to this page in a long time, and I...I have not been to this page in a long time, and I am so glad I returned again. Your work is exquisite as always. I enjoyed what you wrote for the theme,:). Paulo Guimaraeshttp://www.thewaytoshaolin.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-68545923699723354492014-03-27T01:00:36.158+01:002014-03-27T01:00:36.158+01:00Ooh, the puddles of spring!Ooh, the puddles of spring!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-44633576013374632942014-03-26T18:37:50.603+01:002014-03-26T18:37:50.603+01:00Loved the first one.. :)Loved the first one.. :)Jyotsna Bhatiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12201588215531490861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-73634491098397863952014-03-26T00:06:01.234+01:002014-03-26T00:06:01.234+01:00Loved the images these words weave... Loved the id...Loved the images these words weave... Loved the idea of puddles in footsteps.Reshmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01640435257765195374noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-49069654108942651282014-03-25T23:14:06.895+01:002014-03-25T23:14:06.895+01:00"rainstorm of spring" how delightful tho..."rainstorm of spring" how delightful those first drops are, lovelycherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04907967489094621351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-11075938938819371642014-03-25T17:38:37.283+01:002014-03-25T17:38:37.283+01:00ah ! so classical ! 5 stars ! ah ! so classical ! 5 stars ! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-91967471494204830062014-03-25T17:06:01.040+01:002014-03-25T17:06:01.040+01:00 love the first one... love the first one...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-56669541137573332232014-03-25T15:10:10.477+01:002014-03-25T15:10:10.477+01:00both salty frothy
with a fresh sea breeze blowing
...both salty frothy<br />with a fresh sea breeze blowing<br />very nice haikurallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-53908411918383860802014-03-25T04:31:42.314+01:002014-03-25T04:31:42.314+01:00Very nice Haiku. I like the visual images. :-)Very nice Haiku. I like the visual images. :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-70394843256761089702014-03-25T01:53:35.782+01:002014-03-25T01:53:35.782+01:00I, too, enjoyed both poems but, the imagery of foo...I, too, enjoyed both poems but, the imagery of footprints filling with spring time rain, is too good to pass up. Well done! Thank you for sharing such nice writing! :)Thomas Charles MacInneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11331362298948608531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-45466907491586282302014-03-25T01:04:08.296+01:002014-03-25T01:04:08.296+01:00I loved both of these. They both made me long for ...I loved both of these. They both made me long for the beach and feeling the sand between my toes! ♥Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11564863484894692249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-91361848391786323322014-03-24T11:44:56.375+01:002014-03-24T11:44:56.375+01:00They are all wonderful, but I enjoyed the first on...They are all wonderful, but I enjoyed the first one better! Reading Pleasurenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-77203689186022718352014-03-24T11:24:15.200+01:002014-03-24T11:24:15.200+01:00Awww..this is just so beautiful...:)Awww..this is just so beautiful...:)Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-62430619825956405182014-03-24T08:13:25.286+01:002014-03-24T08:13:25.286+01:00The first haiku creates a particularly descriptive...The first haiku creates a particularly descriptive image with beautiful words.Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-34622397738471300242014-03-24T06:25:47.582+01:002014-03-24T06:25:47.582+01:00Loved the choice of words...
mesmerising!Loved the choice of words...<br />mesmerising!Locomentehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16891335111277665181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-54115574579864136712014-03-24T00:08:06.928+01:002014-03-24T00:08:06.928+01:00I especially enjoyed the little puddles of spring!...I especially enjoyed the little puddles of spring!WabiSabihttp://wabisabipoet.wordpress.com/2014/03/23/shifting-sands/noreply@blogger.com