tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post8017567168087556566..comments2023-10-31T11:07:34.135+01:00Comments on Chèvrefeuille's haiku-blog: September Heights, day 7 AgileUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-37651859881873985862012-09-08T22:29:41.941+02:002012-09-08T22:29:41.941+02:00I was surprised to learn that you are writing in a...I was surprised to learn that you are writing in a second language. I admire you, and love the haiku.Sara McNultyhttp://purplepeninportland.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-34358819684662682662012-09-08T17:47:46.889+02:002012-09-08T17:47:46.889+02:00Kris, I think it works best... just the first of t...Kris, I think it works best... just the first of the cascade, with the image of the swan, and that'd be delightful haiga :) Maybe the cascade took away a little. Just a touch.Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-11445388615542649582012-09-08T01:29:29.347+02:002012-09-08T01:29:29.347+02:00You are mastering the cascade form :) :) :) Loved ...You are mastering the cascade form :) :) :) Loved it so much :)Someone is Specialhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16271391140125090742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-19213542398240167382012-09-07T23:05:32.069+02:002012-09-07T23:05:32.069+02:00You always write wonderful, heartfelt haiku, :)! G...You always write wonderful, heartfelt haiku, :)! Great job as always.Paulog30https://www.blogger.com/profile/00513765946140342423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-78469797746194602012012-09-07T21:52:31.133+02:002012-09-07T21:52:31.133+02:00Another successful prompt complete with your touch...Another successful prompt complete with your touch!!<br /><a href="http://beccagivens.wordpress.com/2012/09/07/agility/" rel="nofollow">September Heights - Agility</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-47448929360337160232012-09-07T20:14:07.475+02:002012-09-07T20:14:07.475+02:00you are so talented....even though English isn'...you are so talented....even though English isn't your native tongue, you write better than most everyone else....it's the emotion contrasting with the quietude that stands out to me....joannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18255189465024912528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-83279091567228208052012-09-07T16:11:56.811+02:002012-09-07T16:11:56.811+02:00I liked the sweetness of this cascade! I remember ...I liked the sweetness of this cascade! I remember when I first checked up the word "agile". I checked it in an English-English dictionary and couldn't understand almost a thing, except that it had to do with tigers :-D Imagine - I still relate "agility" to tigers mainly. Well, jaguars, too... Or any other big cats for that matter, esp. cougars or cheetahs.<br />Best, M.Mariya Kolevahttp://phoenix-em.com/mariyakolevanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-74283789585626893012012-09-07T15:45:49.307+02:002012-09-07T15:45:49.307+02:00Good for the swan it found a mate. Well done for w...Good for the swan it found a mate. Well done for writing in a second language so well.Jollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08072901017811869958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-56536276995688148022012-09-07T15:09:53.522+02:002012-09-07T15:09:53.522+02:00Nice cascade. I like the second oneNice cascade. I like the second oneReading Pleasurenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-67831760999966049992012-09-07T14:36:32.946+02:002012-09-07T14:36:32.946+02:00...and I'm satisfied that the swan found a mat......and I'm satisfied that the swan found a mate. Lovely! Hazelhttp://haikubasket.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-18421578356753568062012-09-07T13:47:20.040+02:002012-09-07T13:47:20.040+02:00Agility drives us on to seek--and find--what we ne...Agility drives us on to seek--and find--what we need!<br /><br /><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2012/09/07/an-agile-threesome/" rel="nofollow"><b>An Agile Threesome</b></a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-35185161484014605232012-09-07T08:23:04.075+02:002012-09-07T08:23:04.075+02:00Bravo! English is my mother tongue, but I still l...Bravo! English is my mother tongue, but I still look for synonyms all the time when writing - not just for haiku prompts. I use the Word/Review/thesaurus tab, and just keep it open beside whatever I'm writing.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-88930497235923199522012-09-07T07:35:51.289+02:002012-09-07T07:35:51.289+02:00Liking the use of the swanLiking the use of the swanAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-77503426085284742152012-09-07T07:29:51.283+02:002012-09-07T07:29:51.283+02:00How do you do it everytime..lovely cascading and ...How do you do it everytime..lovely cascading and garnishing it with the pinch of inspiration...odyzzhttp://odizzey.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-33735794115438983332012-09-07T05:03:52.581+02:002012-09-07T05:03:52.581+02:00I like your use of the adjectives in this way...aw...I like your use of the adjectives in this way...awesome post.<br />Peace,<br />Siggi in Downeast MaineSiggi in Downeast Mainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12977578917775406831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-62962496820532002512012-09-07T04:57:19.902+02:002012-09-07T04:57:19.902+02:00The idea of the swan having the agility to move on...The idea of the swan having the agility to move on to another mate is an interesting one. Nice cascade.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-53249414226427464802012-09-07T01:17:44.370+02:002012-09-07T01:17:44.370+02:00I enjoyed this cascading haiku very much and found...I enjoyed this cascading haiku very much and found a hint of agility in the first .Elleceehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07049386448865741626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-38427420542177782002012-09-07T00:15:14.527+02:002012-09-07T00:15:14.527+02:00I lookup the word on google, even if I know the me...I lookup the word on google, even if I know the meaning. Just running through the synonyms over and over again sometimes triggers an idea! And as you say, writing one matters rathar than giving up on a prompt. I say all this, just to encourage myself too! :-)knot2sharehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10295689942692807844noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-23439664702202011122012-09-06T22:09:51.055+02:002012-09-06T22:09:51.055+02:00It is inspiring to me that you are writing in a la...It is inspiring to me that you are writing in a language not your first. It adds another whole dimension to your writing! Thanks for sharing!Barbarahttp://barbarathehealthynut.blogspot.com/2012/09/aerialist.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-90519527010887753412012-09-06T21:30:59.056+02:002012-09-06T21:30:59.056+02:00Lovely cascade. I really like the first and secon...Lovely cascade. I really like the first and second, but they are all good.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14000820772202105961noreply@blogger.com