tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post8046399219293278101..comments2023-10-31T11:07:34.135+01:00Comments on Chèvrefeuille's haiku-blog: Passing ThroughUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-28171484818917114352014-12-02T01:44:57.494+01:002014-12-02T01:44:57.494+01:00As someone who fairly recently started trying to c...As someone who fairly recently started trying to compact impressions into a haiku's structure, it's very interesting to see conjure up such a variety of sensations before the haiku takes shape. I especially liked the observations:<br />"the rainy sphere makes me almost depressed"<br />"rain brings always a kind perfume ... the smell of wetted earth"Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12303400932705395875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-17755214023941752942014-10-14T12:55:00.639+02:002014-10-14T12:55:00.639+02:00I love the thoughtful commentary, the way you invi...I love the thoughtful commentary, the way you invite us to look at your process. The poem you chose by Basho is the perfect compliment!<br /><br />The fragrance of rain (petrichor) was such a beautiful aspect to focus on for your haiku! Wonderfully done =)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2089208585374412481.post-75342505315192705162014-10-14T05:11:10.041+02:002014-10-14T05:11:10.041+02:00Ah, what a moment -- I can see it, feel, it hear i...Ah, what a moment -- I can see it, feel, it hear it, smell it -- frozen in time. A great haiku, Chevrefeuille -- and thanks for sharing a great Basho haiku to go with it. :)<br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com