Monday, April 2, 2012

Haiku Heights April Challenge, day 2 "deserted"


Day 2 of the Haiku Heights April Challenge. Today ... deserted. A word I know and maybe can use for a new haiku. Let's go ...

deserted desert
every where you look sand -
the trail of a desert snake

the trail of a desert snake
crafting a wonderful sand sculpture
towards the oasis

towards the oasis
finally found water and man
deserted desert

Credits: dessert snake (sidewinder)
See you tomorrow.




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9 comments:

  1. carol l mckennaApril 2, 2012 at 3:34 PM

    well done ~ not a pleasant word to work with ~ huh? ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  2. KarenApril 2, 2012 at 5:58 PM

    Great cascading haiku. (might want to change dessert to desert)

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  3. ChèvrefeuilleApril 2, 2012 at 6:41 PM

    Hello Karen, sorry I spelled it wrong, english isn't my maiden language. I have changed it. Thank you for your kind remark. And bringing this to my attention.

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  4. AnonymousApril 2, 2012 at 9:21 PM

    i like the middle one a lot!!

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  5. CherylApril 2, 2012 at 11:57 PM

    Fabulous and descriptive.

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  6. ElleceeApril 3, 2012 at 12:12 AM

    I really enjoyed this haiku. It fits perfectly with the picture of the snake. I can picture it slivering across the sand.

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  7. GraceApril 3, 2012 at 12:22 AM

    Very nice portrait of that deserted desert ~

    Great to see you here ~

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  8. Siggi in Downeast MaineApril 3, 2012 at 2:09 AM

    I like the photo a lot and the haiku to go with it...
    very nice.
    Siggi in Downeast Maine, USA

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  9. ⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺April 3, 2012 at 5:45 PM

    Wow...This is a lovely story!...I loved your imagination :)

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