Hello all,
Day 3 of Haiku Heights April Challenge. Until now I had no problem to write a haiku on the given prompts, but this one harbor isn't easy. But ... never say never ... so I tried and came up with the following haiku.
young dolphins
stranded in the city harbor
hear their sadness
hear their sadness
lost and alone in shallow waters
without their mother
without their mother
crying their lungs out
young dolphins
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| Portofino Harbor |
Well .... see you all tomorrow.
Lovely as usual ~ bit sad ~ very touching ~ thanks, namaste, Carol ^_^
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your haiku for this day. Poor dolphins :-) I can feel their fear and sadness.
ReplyDeletelovely haiku chain, and picture, too.
ReplyDeleteSad, but a lovely sequence.
ReplyDeleteEmotions crafted so well..
ReplyDeletesad but beautiful.
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Very beautiful images...your use of the dolphins is excellent ~
ReplyDeleteFor any creature to be stranded where it doesn't belong is sad...
ReplyDeleteHarbor No Ill Will
Soft spoken words for life.
ReplyDeleteBreath taking words
ReplyDeletecut to the soul...
sad, poor dolphins...
touching.
Peace
Siggi in Downeast Maine, USA
Tugging at my heart strings ~~ sad cascading Haiku!! Thank you for sharing!
ReplyDeleteThis is my Day 3 ~~ Harbor.