Sunday, January 8, 2012

HAIKU HEIGHT's prompt 101 "page"

Mm a tough one this weeks prompt "page". How do I write a haiku with this prompt? I don't no yet ... but I have to try of course or else my name wouldn't be Chèvrefeuille :).

on the way home
I read several pages
of Basho's haiku

pageboy renaissance

the pageboy
a young chrysanthemum
for his master

Well ... I don't know, but I think ...


beccagivens said...

I like the 2nd one!! I haven't heard the term "pageboy" in awhile!!

Millie said...

The second one is wonderful!

anthonynorth said...

I agree, the 2nd is excellent.

Anonymous said...

I really like the second one.

Grace said...

I never thought of this...indeed an eager student is pleasing to the master.

Thanks for sharing this ~