This blog is about haiku. A classical haiku counts 5-7-5 syllables. Chèvrefeuille (the pseudonym of Kristjaan Panneman, a Dutch haiku poet) however writes his haiku in the Kanshicho-style. In the Kanshicho-style the classical syllable count isn't used. Matsuo Basho (1644-1694), a haiku poet, wrote his haiku in Kanshicho-style for several years, but he returned to the classical way of haiku writing. !!! Anonymous comments will be seen as SPAM !!!.
Love the way you end the series, terrible thing that's happening all around... let's pray peace comes quickly I have not submitted anything this week, just going round, admiring - ♥
14 comments:
" just the moon and I" So wonderfully descriptive. I've had just that experience in the Arizona desert
I would love to be alone with the moon in the desert. Sounds lovely.
Lovely capture of the desert's loneliness ~
Desolate, and perfect for the prompt.
That sounds a good place to be:)
Beautiful feeling of being lost in earth space!
The loneliness in this echoes. Strong haiku.
"just the moon and I" would be so heavenly....But, gives a different meaning here! Good one Kristjaan :)
Read in its context being alone with the moon is a terrible thought. In another context it could be lovely.
This felt very biblical!
if the strife continues, what would remain but the desert! very thoughtful!!
Wonderful haiku,my friend
I can only imagine the beauty of a full moon and sky of stars in the desert!!
Parched Bones
Love the way you end the series, terrible thing that's happening all around... let's pray peace comes quickly
I have not submitted anything this week, just going round, admiring - ♥
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