Troiku: a double peony.
Some time ago I wrote a Carpe Diem Preview on a new creative form of writing haiku, the troiku. This post is another try on this new creative way of writing haiku. I love the way how this new form asks me to think about writing haiku. It's, in my opinion, a great way of writing haiku and I enjoyed writing this post very much.
The 'sleigh' is inspired on a haiku by Issa (a classic haiku master) and it was a Carpe Diem Special a few days ago.
pink flowers bloom
between green dewy leaves
a double peony
(sleigh):
pink flowers bloom
between green dewy leaves
a double peony
(horse 1)
pink flowers
as far as man can see -
purple sea
(horse 2)
between green dewy leaves
hides a little green frog
for the blue heron
(horse 3)
a double peony
in full bloom in my garden -
a dawning sun
This blog is about haiku. A classical haiku counts 5-7-5 syllables. Chèvrefeuille (the pseudonym of Kristjaan Panneman, a Dutch haiku poet) however writes his haiku in the Kanshicho-style. In the Kanshicho-style the classical syllable count isn't used. Matsuo Basho (1644-1694), a haiku poet, wrote his haiku in Kanshicho-style for several years, but he returned to the classical way of haiku writing. !!! Anonymous comments will be seen as SPAM !!!.
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Friday, December 7, 2012
Monday, November 26, 2012
Tackle It Tuesday, Moonlight
Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
This greeting is the one I always use on my daily haiku meme Carpe Diem and today I will use it here for our new Tackle It Tuesday. Why? Well ... in our next month of Carpe Diem (December 2012) I have chosen for classical Japanese 'kigo' or seasonwords for prompts. Next month the prompts are all about winter, see for yourself here , so for this weeks 'Tackle' I have chosen for a classical kigo or seasonword of Autumn.
Our 'Tackle' prompt is moonlight In classical Japan they think the moon of Autumn is most beautiful. In that ... I follow them ... I think also that the Autumn moon is the most beautiful. But ... also in my region of the world (Europe) the Winter moon is beautiful too.
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Credits: Moonlight |
My take on Moonlight:
reflecting sunlight
our natural satellite -
dark of it's own
dark of it's own
the moon catches beams of sunlight
sharing them with us
sharing them with us
her wonderful smile
autumn moonlight
Hope to see a lot of haiku on moonlight. Be inspired and share your creativity.
Just a little treat ... Moonlight Serenade ....
This Tackle It Tuesday will stay on 'till December 10th 11.59 AM (CET). So you have two weeks to share your haiku ... Tackle It Tuesday will be from now on a bi-weekly haiku meme.
Namaste
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haiku,
Kigo,
moonlight,
Tackle It Tuesday
Locatie:
Nederland
Saturday, November 24, 2012
Haiku Heights, desert
Inspired by the theme at

deserted streets
civil wars all over the world -no more joy at all
no more joy at all
lost and alone in the desertjust the moon and I
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Credits: Desert |
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haiku,
Haiku Heights
Silvery waves resonate
Just an Impromptu verse
the moon is rising
the silvery waves resonate
in tune with my heart
the moon is rising
the silvery waves resonate
in tune with my heart
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Credits: silvery waves resonate |
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Friday, November 23, 2012
Box of chocolates
box of chocolates
what a sweet temptation -
scent of cocoa
Just an impromptu verse.
what a sweet temptation -
scent of cocoa
Just an impromptu verse.
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Credits: box of chocolates |
Early Sunrise (impromptu-verse)
Today I was very early awake. After a cup of coffee I went outside and saw a wonderful sunrise. The clouds looked like fingers and were pink colored, it looked just like they sprouted from the horizon. So I had to write a haiku about it.
early sunrise
pink cloud fingers sprouting
at the horizon
Isn't it a beauty?
early sunrise
pink cloud fingers sprouting
at the horizon
Isn't it a beauty?
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haiku,
impromptu verse,
sunrise
Tuesday, November 20, 2012
Carpe Diem's Rose (a reprise verse)
For Carpe Diem, seize the day, a daily haiku meme I have written the next haiku on 'rose'. I love this prompt and I hope that you like the haiku.
november ending
while the first snow falls -
a last rose blooms
departing Autumn
the end of this year coming nearer
longing for Spring
a new hope rises
departing of this years autumn
lighting a candle
Sincerely,
while the first snow falls -
a last rose blooms
departing Autumn
the end of this year coming nearer
longing for Spring
a new hope rises
departing of this years autumn
lighting a candle
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credits: yoruba girl dancing |
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autumn,
Carpe Diem,
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Locatie:
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Monday, November 19, 2012
Misty Morning
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Credits: Misty Graveyard |
The prompt for today is MIST.
misty morning
the sound of church bells
wakes the dead
Another one:
through the mist
bellowing of cows
the sound of church bells
And for closure:
exposed to mist
an old sand stone church
looking as new
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Credits: Penshurst Church |
Labels:
Carpe Diem,
haiku,
mist
Locatie:
Nederland
Saturday, November 17, 2012
Peonies
Isn''t it a wonderful flower? The Peony ... so fragile and colorful, but it can also be a big flower when the Peony is a ''double one".
I had to write another haiku inspired on this haiku by Issa:
the peony falls
spilling out yesterday''s
rain
This is my other haiku on peony:
pink flowers bloom
between green dewy leaves
a double peony
Hm it''s a beauty I think.
Have a nice weekend ... see you another day.
Labels:
Carpe Diem,
haiku,
Issa,
peony
Locatie:
Nederland
Tuesday, November 13, 2012
Tackle It Tuesday, Chrysanthemum
Tackle It Tuesday starts today with a new 'rule'. Every episode will stay on for two weeks. Why? Because of lack of time, I have my daily Carpe Diem haiku meme and for now that's my main meme. So this episode of Tackle It Tuesday will stay on 'till Monday November 26th 11.59 AM (CET) and I will post the new episode of Tackle It Tuesday that day around 10.00 PM (CET). Hope you all understand this.
Dear Haijin, visitors and travelers,
Another week has passed away ... our last Tackle It Tuesday prompt was 'Wuthering Heights' and it wasn't a great success, but ... well it wasn't an easy prompt. So for this week I have chosen Chrysanthemum a wonderful Autumn (and Winter) 'kigo' or seasonword. It's really a nice flower for this time of year.
Last Sunday I was visiting my parents in law in Amsterdam. My father in law had a wonderful basket full of Chrysanthemum in his garden. They were wonderful colored, yellow, orange, purple and white. A nice Autumn bouquet. I was a bit sad after our visit, because I hadn't my camera with me. If I had ... than I could have shown you this wonderful Chrysanthemum basket. So now I will use another photo for this post.
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Chrysanthemums bouquet |
the backyard looks like a rainbow
Chrysanthemums in bloom
in the garden
of my parents in law
Chrysanthemums bloom
a sea of colors
as far as you can see
blooming Chrysanthemums
Well ... I hope these haiku inspire you, my dear haijin, visitors and travelers, to be creative and write your own haiku. Please share your creativity with Tackle It Tuesday.
This Tackle It Tuesday episode will be staying on 'till November 19th 11.59 PM (CET).
Have fun!
Labels:
chrysanthemum,
haiku,
Tackle It Tuesday
Locatie:
Nederland
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