Wednesday, February 22, 2012

The Haiku Challenge, day 22



Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 22 – February 22nd – Theme: Paint the Image...




Photo Clicked by Enosh of: Enosh Bansode Photography

I don't know if this is the right Photo, but ... I have used this one to write a new contribution to the Haiku Challenge.

at sunrise
trees waving in the cool breeze
another hot day

another hot day
I am looking for shade
under the willow

under the willow
I laid down my tired head
dreaming sunrises


I read these wonderful comments of my visitors and than realized that a really had used the wrong picture. Well .... I have to revise this one, but I am not going to delete this picture and the haiku. I will place the correct photo here and write a new contribution.

Credits: Enosh


ankle chimes
listen to the movement
of the young dancer


a ballerina
dances through the streets
sound of chimes


sound of chimes
through the midsummer night
fading away


See you tomorrow for another challenging haiku day.


15 comments:

Grace said...

The picture image is different though..I think you can still revise the post ;-)

Mama Zen said...

Gorgeous set!

Ellecee said...

"dreaming sunrises" I like that and I like your other Haiku. Even though I used a different picture :-)

vivinfrance said...

Not the right photo (I sympathise: I have difficulty with the haiku challenge blog - there's so much of it and it is so clunky to load!)

But who cares: your haiku are gorgeous!

Asni said...

Lovely set of haiku even though you used the wrong photo, at first. He he! As Vivinfrance said "who cares - your haiku are gorgeous!"

becca givens said...

You are a fountain of delightful Haiku ... for both images ... right photographer! :)

Thank you for the addition ... I was looking forward to your interpretation ... I was not disappointed. :) Here is my Day 22.

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Nice flow of haiku.....It's good that you made a mistake...we could read haiku on two pictures.....:D

Susie Clevenger said...

Love your dreaming under the willow.
Love the dancer haiku also..the last one is my favorite. :)

sonsylass said...

Yes, I enjoyed them all and both the pictures :-)

Terri / CloakedMonk said...

I love the first one with your found image. Beautiful. The other is good also.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

You simply got carried away with images and painting them in words! Lovely, both sets!

Painted Images here and here

paulo guimaraes said...

Dude, all of your haiku were exceptional. Good job with both images.

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Yeah, I like the clever interchange of the descriptive word, young dancer - ballerina, etc.

Clever stuff!

Someone is Special said...

"who cares ~ your haiku is gorgeous" ~ truly and heartily :-)

zongrik said...

interesting how you also picked the anklets. i totally ignored them.

nice.