Saturday, February 25, 2012

The Haiku Challenge, day 25



Today's challenge, write a haiku with the theme or word "cult" and the haiku form I have to use is 3-5-3. This is a complete different scheme as is common for haiku. Haiku, in the classical form has three sentences of 5-7-5 syllables. So this will be a tough challenge. No ... that's bullsh.., because I write in the so called Kanshicho style. That style has no strictly rules for the syllables. So this must be "a piece of cake" for me. I hope so.
Well ... I had to search for the definition of cult and for synonyms for cult. The meaning of cult "group sharing belief" and I found the following synonyms: body; church; clan; faith; following; religion; persuasion. A long row of synonyms which I can use for today's challenge.
This is tougher than I thought.

Honeysuckle
can be wonderful -
persuasion



my religion
faith of Mother Earth
blooming plum


the old church
a shelter for the storm -
the butterflies

See you again tomorrow, for another challenge day :-)

13 comments:

Asni said...

Not an easy subject to write a haiku on but I am impressed at how inspired you can be to come out with 3! Very lovely to read you.

Thank you so much for your kind comments at my post yesterday.

Have a great day!

Ellecee said...

These are lovely, I like them very much. Good thoughts on "cult"

Magyar said...

in this tribe
a clan of dreamers
campfires

"Campfires" is (here) a -local- metaphor, for a "klatch" of people that sit around a campfire and enjoy each others company; it, a clannish setting of course.

Always, _m

Grace said...

Thank you for your effort and set ~

I appreciate them ~

Rachana Shakyawar said...

I'm so over-whelmed to read all the three Haiku.

The first one 'Honeysuckle persuasion' simple made that magical aura..
The second one 'Blooming pulp my faith in mother Earth..' so earthy and I could connect it so well. I could feel it every word of that haiku that trust!!

The third one is one of my favorite. I'm almost lost is the beauty of picture that Haiku shows while reading it. An old Church...sure a shelter from storm of nature & a storm sometimes we see in our inner soul..wow!!! finally the words the butterflies absolutely amplify everything rest left in this world...

I'm still not sure how you would have perceived this Haiku but to me reading that haiku was almost equivalent of being a part of Chapel!!!!
Loved every bit of it!!!!
So blessed to have read it!!!
Thank you so much for sharing it!

~Keep the Spark ALive..

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Very Beautiful haiku!...Thanks for the synonyms...And thanks for explanation....It always helps me to write a haiku :)

Humanity

cloakedmonk.com said...

This is just lovely!

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

And you thought you were going to have trouble with this prompt! Ha! Well done!


Virgin’s cult

Ramesh Sood said...

Very interesting and beautifully done.. you are blessed..

beccagivens said...

I am convinced you can write in any style of Haiku ... you delivered an amazing perspective of cult - in a delightful way. Enjoyed each one, and I cannot determine a favorite at this time. Thank you for sharing ~~ Here is my Day 25.

Susie Clevenger said...

I love your nature cult...lovely haiku

Chèvrefeuille said...

I am speechless. Such great comments. Awesome!
Rachana your comment ... thank you so much. I am glad you loved this entrance for The Haiku Challenge.

Thank you all for your kind words they make me humble and thankful that I can (and may) share my haiku with you.

a new day has come
after the dark wintertime
finally spring

Someone is Special said...

'Honeysuckle' ~ Loved your Haiku set a lot.. Thanks!