Wednesday, April 18, 2012

Haiku Heights April Challenge, day 18 "white"


Day 18 of the Haiku Heights April Challenge is on.

white world
in just one long night
finally winter

finally winter
frosty night has carved
wonderful trees

Credits: Ice on window
wonderful trees
covered with fresh snow
crystalizing sunlight

crystalizing sunlight
the backyard covered with snow
white world

6 comments:

kaykuala said...

Great cascading haiku, Chev! Nostalgic episodes of winter delightfully relayed!

Hank

The Happy Amateur said...

I like the way haiku become links in a chain that comes full circle. Like a crystal necklace :-)

Marleen said...

Hoe mooi de winter ook kan zijn, ik ben toch blij dat het lente is!
Winter can be beautiful indeed, however I´m happy it is Spring!

dank je wel en groetjes, best wishes

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

It certainly doesn't take long for winter to do its work, does it? About as long, I'd say, as dashing off a haiku or two! :)

“Hungry Sunrise Fire & White Bird”

PattiKen said...

Lovely winter haiku. Much of the US didn't see that this year.

Mr. Walker said...

I really like "crystalizing sunlight". They're all good, but that third one is my favorite.

Richard