There we are again for a new day in our April Challenge of Haiku Heights. This day it's all on clarity, the prompt given by Becca Givens, clarity (in dutch helderheid) has a few synonyms for example brightness, purity and serenity. All words which I can use for today's haiku. So lets start.
bright sunlight
reflects on the white wall
shadows moving
shadows moving
making my kids anxious
I caress them
I caress them
in their purity and serenity
my adult kids
my adult kids
standing in our garden
bright sunlight
18 comments:
Loved it ... beautiful narration ...
full circle haiku ~ full circle life ~ lovely ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
I always enjoy your haiku. It flows beautifully and says much. Thank you.
Very lovely set...I like the bright sunlight and children's purity ~
I am also sharing that clarity means a clear vision or being understood.
Happy day ~
Clever twist to meanings of clarity, Chev! And it's the familiar cascading effect again! Great take. Danke!
Hank
beautiful narration...shadows moving and anxious kids...Very beautiful to read that :)
Fuddling thoughts
Beautiful tale woven! :)
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Mooi Kristjaan, vooral de eerste! (heb nog wel steeds mijn Engelse woordenboek nodig..)
groetjes, Ria
I really like these series of 'cascading' haiku. Shadows can be magical... thanks for reminding - I will look out for the shadow of the tree on my wall, it appears around 2 'o clock...
Children and clarity,.very nicely written :)
Even adult children need comforting. So glad you know how to give it!
Seeking Clarity—and Shadows
Very beautiful and bright.
This is lovely. Even in adulthood, they are still our children!
Very nice. I like this a lot.
Peace,
Siggi in Downeast Maine, USA
full circle haiku - well done!
Each is beautiful in its own right, and I love the way you have threaded them together. I'm eager to try this!
Beautiful....
lovely, lovely flow!!!
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