Hello to you all,
After our April Challenge we start with new weekly prompts. This week's prompt is hour not so easy to write a haiku about, but I should try ...
in the rush hour
standing in a full train
reading the newspaper
reading the newspaper
another day of 24 hours
caught in black ink
caught in black ink
stories on war and hunger
all around the world
all around the world
people reading the newspaper
in the rush hour
See you next week.
19 comments:
Nice capture of that mad rush hour...
I specially like black ink stories ~
I think your series does a very good job of taking the day full circle. Nicely done.
Wonderful essence of the 'rush hour' ~ well crafted ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
Liked it a lot... You captured all the details of the particular scene! Lovely..
so many people around us during rush hour, and we shut them all out, amazing we can even notice them just reading the paper
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I like your image of the rush hour. Nicely done.
You are right, this was not an easy prompt to write about, but you've done a fine job. You captured the life of the rush hour very accurately.
Beautifully composed haiku :)
These scenes were eye-stuck when I read this, nice!
Wow! it's amazing this image! i like it!
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Wow! I like your "caught in black ink"!
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rush hour nicely captured.
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Haiku was great, as well as the pic...I love the rush
I like this form. You've captured the feel of that hour on the train.
Hi to you all. Thank you for your nice comments on this entry for Haiku Heights.
I have started today a new challenge. I have called it Tackle It Tuesday and you can write a haiku on a given prompt. Today Tackle It Tuesday is online and the first prompt is "RAINDROPS". Join the fun!
Rush hour - perfectly captured. Newspapers may be going away, but rush hour isn't.
Richard
The mad rush hour is the same all the world over be it on the road or the subway. The crowd is there and we still feel lonely - no one is talking!
Hank
I am so glad I do not have to worry about the mad dash of the rush hour ... but from the stories and my imagination -- you caught it well!!
Nice cascading form ~~~ and I like the "Caught in Black Ink Stories" ~~
Thank you for your visit to Bewitching Hour and the invitation to Tackle it Tuesday!! Will happily check it out!! :)
You captured the essence of that train ride, that reality, all the while maintaining excellent form. Nicely done!
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