This blog is about haiku. A classical haiku counts 5-7-5 syllables. Chèvrefeuille (the pseudonym of Kristjaan Panneman, a Dutch haiku poet) however writes his haiku in the Kanshicho-style. In the Kanshicho-style the classical syllable count isn't used. Matsuo Basho (1644-1694), a haiku poet, wrote his haiku in Kanshicho-style for several years, but he returned to the classical way of haiku writing. !!! Anonymous comments will be seen as SPAM !!!.
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Showing posts with label tanka. Show all posts
Showing posts with label tanka. Show all posts
Tuesday, August 1, 2017
Carpe Diem Autumn Retreat 2017 (9) leaving home
Dear friends,
Maybe you have noticed it, but the Carpe Diem Autumn Retreat 2017 is running. This Retreat the theme is "departure" and I think it is a wonderful theme for autumn, but ... and that you will have seen also ... I am not a regular publisher in this Retreat, but I love to change that.
So here is a new "impromptu" verse themed departure:
leaving home
in a hurry
grandfather again
© Chèvrefeuille
No ... I have not become a granddad again, it is a haiku I wrote, because two (2) of my grandchildren had birthday last month. And two (2) other grandchildren this month ...
See you ...
Labels:
Carpe Diem Autumn Retreat 2017,
departure,
haiku,
tanka
Wednesday, July 26, 2017
Carpe Diem Autumn Retreat 2017 (7) leaving home
Dear friends,
As you maybe know I am hosting a daily haiku meme, also on blogspot, titled Carpe Diem Haiku Kai and maybe you know that I am initiating a seasonly retreat every season. The Carpe Diem Autumn Retreat 2017 is running already for a month and I have already read wonderful haiku and tanka, but until today I didn't publish a lot for this autumn retreat, so today that's going to change.
The theme for the Carpe Diem Autumn Retreat is departure, because I associate autumn with departure and leaving or letting go ... not an easy theme maybe, but of course I just want to challenge you and myself.
leaving home
the youngest son of four kids
finally on his own
cherishing the love of his life
being together as one
© Chèvrefeuille
It's a strange idea that the last of your children is leaving the nest ... of course we all know that they have to go one day, but as that day comes it gives you a real feeling of departure ... your life as parents is changing immensely ... an empty nest ...
See you again ...
Labels:
Carpe Diem Autumn Retreat 2017,
departure,
tanka
Locatie:
Netherlands
Saturday, December 10, 2016
Tanka Kukai "Winter Love"
Dear friends,
Here is my submission for the first ever Tanka Kukai at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai, my daily haiku meme. This first ever Tanka Kukai is themed "winter love" and here is my submission:
wonderful trees
covered with fresh snow
crystalizing sunlight
the backyard covered with snow
finally a white Christmas
©
Chèvrefeuille
If you would like to participate in this first ever Tanka Kukai "Winter Love" than visit the post about it HERE.See you ...
Labels:
Carpe Diem,
tanka,
Tanka Kukai Winter Love
Locatie:
Nederland
Carpe Diem Winter Retreat 2016 "Find The Silence" #20 the sound of rain
Dear friends,
The Winter Retreat of Carpe Diem is almost over. It runs until December 15th at 10.00 PM (CET), so just a few days to respond. This Winter Retreat was a joy, but also a challenge. Trying to write a haiku or tanka on a daily base wasn't easy, but as I see how many responded than it was for sure a success.
the sound of rain
on the tin roof of the cabin
deepens the silence
© Chèvrefeuille
See you ....
PS. If you would like to participate .... than feel free to visit Carpe Diem Haiku Kai by clicking on the above (fat) link.
Labels:
30 days,
Carpe Diem Winter Retreat,
find the silence,
haiku,
tanka
Locatie:
Netherlands
Wednesday, December 7, 2016
Carpe Diem Winter Retreat 2016 "find the silence" #19 a tanka
Dear friends,
Just a few minutes ago I created a new post for Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. In that episode I shared a tanka that was inspired on a piece of music, but it fits also the theme of the Winter Retreat, so I love to share that Tanka here too for the Winter Retreat of Carpe Diem.
heavenly music
resonates through the neighborhood
early sunrise
birds praising their creator
I embrace my love
resonates through the neighborhood
early sunrise
birds praising their creator
I embrace my love
© Chèvrefeuille
See you ...
Labels:
Carpe Diem Winter Retreat,
find the silence,
tanka
Locatie:
Netherlands
Sunday, November 27, 2016
Carpe Diem Winter Retreat 2016 #12 New Year's Eve
Dear friends,
Another submission for the Winter Retreat "find the silence" of Carpe Diem Haiku Kai.
Ah! that silence
the first day of a new year
the wind of last year
plays with bare branches
nothing has changed
© Chèvrefeuille
See you ...
Labels:
30 days,
Carpe Diem Winter Retreat,
find the silence,
tanka
Locatie:
Netherlands
Carpe Diem Winter Retreat 2016 "find the silence" #11 a new day
Dear friends,
As you all know the first Winter Retreat of Carpe Diem Haiku Kai is running and I haven't had time enough to publish every day for this Retreat, so my excuses for thst. For today I have a beautiful tanka, if I may say that myself, a little bit immodest ...
silence
listening to the rain
this morning
the birds celebrate
a new day
listening to the rain
this morning
the birds celebrate
a new day
© Chèvrefeuille
See you ...
Labels:
30 days,
Carpe Diem Winter Retreat,
find the silence,
tanka
Locatie:
Netherlands
Tuesday, November 22, 2016
Carpe Diem Winter Retreat 2016 "find the silence" #8
Dear friends,
I am on the nightshift and that means that I have not enough time to write for this or my other weblog. However ... a haiku in which the theme of this Carpe Diem Winter Retreat "find the silence" is used must be done.
I love writing haiku (or tanka) and it's really a joy to create haiku (or tanka) on a daily base. So I just had to do it.
Today I have a nice tanka for you, maybe you have read this one already on one of my other blogs, but as I stated above ... I don't have time enough. This one is from my archives:
autumn departs
in deep silence willow leaves fall -
tears on this grave
as the willow is green again
another year has gone
©
Chèvrefeuille
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Willow Tree in Autumn |
See you ...
Labels:
30 days,
autumn,
Carpe Diem Winter Retreat,
find the silence,
tanka
Locatie:
Nederland
Friday, August 5, 2016
Carpe Diem Summer Retreat 2016 (22) ghostly cobweb
Dear friends,
Today I have chosen to create a tanka for you to submit for the Carpe Diem Summer Retreat. I am not a great tanka poet, but I like to use this form on a regular base just to stay in touch with the form.
ghostly
cobweb
shimmering
in the early daylight
pearls
of dew
fainting
away when the sun rises
like
a phantom
© Chèvrefeuille
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Ghostly cobweb |
Well ... I hope you did like this tanka. See you tomorrow.
Have an awesome weekend.
Locatie:
Netherlands
Thursday, August 4, 2016
Carpe Diem Summer Retreat 2016 (21) sunflowers
Dear friends,
Here is my new submission for the Summer Retreat of Carpe Diem. This time I love to share a "cascading" tanka.
in
my garden
sunflowers bow their heads
in honor of the sun
I plant a pair of sunflowers
in the backyard
sunflowers bow their heads
in honor of the sun
I plant a pair of sunflowers
in the backyard
in
the backyard
no sun at all will be seen
only sunflowers
those beautiful little suns
in my garden
no sun at all will be seen
only sunflowers
those beautiful little suns
in my garden
©
Chèvrefeuille
See you tomorrow.
Locatie:
Netherlands
Sunday, July 31, 2016
Carpe Diem Summer Retreat 2016 "one with nature" (17) silk tree, a tanka
Dear friends,
As you all know I am a haiku poet and the most poetry I wrote are haiku, but today I love to share a tanka with you. A tanka, is like haiku, an ancient Japanese poetry form, but instead of three (3) lines a tanka is written with five (5) lines.
Several years ago I started to create as they are called "cascading haiku", and nowadays I "re-write" those "cascading haiku" to tanka, or stand alone haiku. Today's tanka "silk tree" is a re-done cascading haiku:
silk tree blossoms
in a soothing summer rain
trembling in silence
silk tree blossoms, so fragile,
in a summer breeze
trembling in silence
silk tree blossoms, so fragile,
in a summer breeze
©
Chèvrefeuille
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Silk Tree |
Well .... see you tomorrow again. Have a great week.
Locatie:
Netherlands
Monday, July 27, 2015
Honeysuckle coolness, a tanka
Dear friends and followers,
It's a new dawn ... I, Chèvrefeuille, will start to compose tanka. Tanka is another nice Japanese poetry form. It looks like waka, 5-7-5-7-7 and maybe you recognize it as part of renga or as a Tan Renga.
Recently we had an 'ask Jane' episode at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai, my daily haiku meme, about the beauty of tanka. Jane even has said that I could be a tanka poet. I am not a tanka poet, but I do like tanka. So I have decided to pick up the challenge to become a tanka poet next to being a haiku poet and ... seriously I love to try tanka.
Tanka is known as 'love-poetry', because tanka was used, like waka, as the way to give the deepest feelings of love, mostly hidden in the words and lines, to your loved one ...
Here is my first attempt ever to write tanka, as a love poem ...:
Lilies of the valley
their sweet perfume makes me drowsy
hot summer night
between silken sheets her warmth
honeysuckle coolness
© Chèvrefeuille
Well ... what do you think of this first attempt?
Other link for an episode of "Ask Jane" about Tanka
Friday, January 17, 2014
My New Weblog Is Launched!
Dear friends,
It's my pleasure to introduce to you my second Carpe Diem Haiku Kai weblog. As you maybe know I started a daily haiku meme in October 2012. At that weblog I give every day a prompt for your inspiration to write haiku, senryu, tanka or kyoka and share it with the world. I also started several Special items for inspiration. For example: "Tanka Shrine", a Special about Tanka or "Distillation" in which item I ask you to distil a haiku from a longer poem.
All those Specials, except the weekly Tan Renga Challenge and the Specials in which I share a haiku from another haiku-poet for your inspiration, I have brought to a new weblog.
That new weblog titled "Carpe Diem Haiku Kai Special" is online now since January 6th 2014. I love to invite you all to visit that new weblog to read and be inspired to participate if you like haiku and other Japanese poetry forms.
You can find that new weblog at: http://carpediemhaikukaispecial.blogspot.com
and my first Carpe Diem Haiku Kai weblog you can find at: http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com
Feel free to visit and share, if you wish to, your haiku with these haiku-communities. You're welcome.
Namaste
Chèvrefeuille
Labels:
Carpe Diem,
Carpe Diem Haiku Kai Special,
haiku,
Japanese poetry,
kyoka,
senryu,
tanka
Locatie:
Nederland
Friday, December 2, 2011
Thursday Poets Rally, week 57
Another week has gone by. The Thursday Poets Rally week 57 has already begun. So another weeks challenge to write a few haiku for this Poets Rally.
Sometimes I don't have enough inspiration to write my haiku, but the last days there was an overwhelming inspiration by reading Haiku Vol. 3 by R.H.Blyth. In our haiku world we call the Haiku series (4 volumes) of Blyth "the Bible of haiku". Blyth has a great feeling with haiku of the ancient masters such as Matsuo Basho and Kobayashi Issa. Vol. 3 of this series is titled "summer-autumn". I love both seasons, but My heart begans beating a little bit harder when it's autumn. So I have chosen a few haiku with autumn as theme.
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autumn tranquility |
the colourful leaves
Ah! what a sight
mysterious moon
behind thin clouds
leaves falling
tears fall
this autumn day
has gone by
such sadness
without the full moon
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credits: moon behind clouds |
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A cold winter day I think of days gone and days to come |
Sincerely,
Labels:
autumn,
haiku,
perfect poets award,
tanka,
Thursday Poets Rally
Locatie:
Nederland
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