
This weeks haiku wednesday has the prompt "fleeting", a nice prompt to work with. It wasn't easy, but I succeeded.
her perfume
is fleeting with her laughter -
mother's funeral
Until next wednesday
This blog is about haiku. A classical haiku counts 5-7-5 syllables. Chèvrefeuille (the pseudonym of Kristjaan Panneman, a Dutch haiku poet) however writes his haiku in the Kanshicho-style. In the Kanshicho-style the classical syllable count isn't used. Matsuo Basho (1644-1694), a haiku poet, wrote his haiku in Kanshicho-style for several years, but he returned to the classical way of haiku writing. !!! Anonymous comments will be seen as SPAM !!!.
8 comments:
fragrance magic...good one.
so sad and beautiful. Well done.
A poignant last line. beautiful.
Well done haiku on death!!
fragrant & poignant piece, vivid & arresting.
thanks for sharing.
So poignant :)
Haunting...well done.
I am moved by your nice comments. Thanks.
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