Wednesday, November 9, 2011

SENSATIONAL HAIKU WEDNESDAY, prompt "fleeting"

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This weeks haiku wednesday has the prompt "fleeting", a nice prompt to work with. It wasn't easy, but I succeeded.

her perfume
is fleeting with her laughter -
mother's funeral



Until next wednesday

9 comments:

Ruchi Jain said...

fragrance magic...good one.

Amy E Thompson said...

so sad and beautiful. Well done.

anthonynorth said...

A poignant last line. beautiful.

Nanka said...

Well done haiku on death!!

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Beautiful!

tinkwelborn said...

fragrant & poignant piece, vivid & arresting.
thanks for sharing.

SprigBlossoms said...

So poignant :)

Timoteo said...

Haunting...well done.

Chèvrefeuille said...

I am moved by your nice comments. Thanks.