The Poetry Palace |
Cranes fly
through the evening clouds
what a sight
A lonely flower
my companion
for one night
At sunrise
the sound of church bells -
my morning prayer
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7 comments:
Enjoyed them. nicely done.
i loved this line, it was beautiful
"A lonely flower
my companion
for one night"
Thank you for your kind comment. The lonely flower is the first haiku ever which I wrote in English, with that one I became an international known haiku poet. It is still one of my favorites.
Beautiful imagery in this poem, it felt lighthearted and warm to me :) Thank you for sharing :)
Very cool. The flower and church bells imagery definitely stand out in this sparse verse. Well written!
Great imagery and feeling in your poems :)
Thanks for all your nice comments. Haiku is really my passion and I hope there will come a day that my haiku are just like the haiku of Matsuo Basho (1644-1694) my great rolemodel (and haikumaster).
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