Saturday, November 5, 2011

HAIKU HEIGHTS prompt "mystery"


what a mystery
leaves falling year after year
without mourning

Haiku Heights


12 comments:

Grace said...

your last line was unexpected... nice one ~

SuzyQ said...

Very Beautiful. A sublime haiku, with a perfect ending!

Chèvrefeuille said...

I wasn't really optimistic about this one, but now I can see the surprise. Thank you both for your kind comment.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Leaves know the grace of letting go...

Mystery of Fences

anthonynorth said...

I like that last line.

Priyanka Bhowmick said...

they've learned to smile in pain.. beautifully done!

Susie Clevenger said...

lovely haiku...and I agree with Grace the ending was unexpected.

The Orange Tree said...

powerful ending.

Happy Rally.

beccagivens said...

An unexpected but graceful ending ... I love Autumn's beauty!!

Ramesh Sood said...

Would tree be mourning the separation and at the same time rejoicing with expectations of new arrivals...you made me think.. lovely haiku that!!

Morning said...

perfect.

Chèvrefeuille said...

What a good feeling to read all your nice comments. It's overwhelming and makes me humble.
Namaste

all the love given
the overwhelming feelings
makes me humble