This blog is about haiku. A classical haiku counts 5-7-5 syllables. Chèvrefeuille (the pseudonym of Kristjaan Panneman, a Dutch haiku poet) however writes his haiku in the Kanshicho-style. In the Kanshicho-style the classical syllable count isn't used. Matsuo Basho (1644-1694), a haiku poet, wrote his haiku in Kanshicho-style for several years, but he returned to the classical way of haiku writing. !!! Anonymous comments will be seen as SPAM !!!.
12 comments:
your last line was unexpected... nice one ~
Very Beautiful. A sublime haiku, with a perfect ending!
I wasn't really optimistic about this one, but now I can see the surprise. Thank you both for your kind comment.
Leaves know the grace of letting go...
Mystery of Fences
I like that last line.
they've learned to smile in pain.. beautifully done!
lovely haiku...and I agree with Grace the ending was unexpected.
powerful ending.
Happy Rally.
An unexpected but graceful ending ... I love Autumn's beauty!!
Would tree be mourning the separation and at the same time rejoicing with expectations of new arrivals...you made me think.. lovely haiku that!!
perfect.
What a good feeling to read all your nice comments. It's overwhelming and makes me humble.
Namaste
all the love given
the overwhelming feelings
makes me humble
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