Sunday, September 16, 2012

September Heights, day 17 meadow

Inspired by the theme at


Today the prompt is meadow,  grassland, must be an easy one to write a haiku on. In my country we have great meadows. So let's go do this.

lie down on my back
the perfume of the meadow
makes me drowsy

Well ... do you like this one? See you tomorrow.




17 comments:

vivinfrance said...

poppies make a good soporific.

haikudoyou said...

I do like this one! I can see the whole scene- relaxed, peaceful

Barbara said...

Oh I love this!! You make it look so easy!!

PattiKen said...

Me too!

Ellecee said...

I love this haiku of yours. This is something I enjoy doing so much and you picture it perfectly.

Kathy Donlan said...

I love it. I can imagine it.

Judith Westerfield said...

Ah yes, lying on your back in a meadow. Such a warm memory you've stirred.

Leo said...

Ah.. makes me wonder if the perfume made you drowsy so you lay down, or if the perfume became like a lullaby and made you drowsy after you had lied down :) Beautiful.

odyzz said...

serene and relaxing ..like it :)

Mariya Koleva said...

oh, yes - I can feel that perfume, too!
But, Kristjaan, what happened to the Tackle It Tuesday? I am looking for the new prompt for this week, and find it not I do :-D (small Yoda-speak)

Best, M.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Sexy little haiku for today, sir!

No Meadow

Reading Pleasure said...

Ah, a lovely feeling

Tigerbrite said...

Lovely :)

susanwritesprecise said...

I like this a lot. Very nice

Sara McNulty said...

What is growing in the meadow? Sounds lovely.

Hazel said...

I sniff a sweet-smelling naptime. Wonderful!

awalkinmyheart said...

How lovely to have the time to lie down in the meadow and just breath its perfume!