WINTER FEELING
A wondrous place. Trees and streets covered with snow. The bright sunlight. Roofs like crystal.
Love is warming our bodies in front of the fireplace.Drinking red wine, eating marshmallows. This is paradise.
Our legs intwined. Lost in each others eyes. Together you and I.
making love
in front of the fireplace -
winter feeling
5 comments:
super creative, wow.
a story plus a Haiku, 55 word.
brilliant!
__Very warm feeling here; too, I like your recent posts at WHW.
__To comlpiment (or complement) those butterfly haiku / haibun, this:
butterfly
floats on the warming air
noon sun
Always, _m
The Purple and Magyar thank you so much for these kind words. And ... Magyar thank you for the beautiful haiku.
Namaste
Beautiful imagery, I can feel the warmth of the fire and the radiance of two hearts together as one.
I loved this. It was creative, passionate, loving and warm. I could feel the warmth of the flames on my skin and feelings of peace and security. Very well done. Be blessed.
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