Inspired by the theme at
Good day to you all, my dear visitors,
Day 25 of September Heights is on, the theme is sleep. I can imagine a few haiku on this theme, so let's go for it and do some haiku composing.
midday nap
a hot summer day break
against the cool wall
a butterfly
sleeping on a sunflower
shall he have a dream?
be my friend
blue butterfly on Honeysuckle
I am alone
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| Source: Blue Butterfly on Sunflower |
17 comments:
A roving friend can be a shoulder to cry on. They come at the right moment!
Nicely Kris!
Hank
The first one is spot on!! Perfect use of the prompt. I love it!!
I enjoyed your haiku today, especially the first one. I would enjoy doing that,,,,
Ahhh the blue butterfly and honeysuckle are enjoying themselves! Charming lines all.
Very beautiful haiku set....Just like a beautiful dream!...Loved the way you described midday nap!
Sleeping on a sunflower - I love the imagery you've created with your words
The first one sounds like i have read it here before too! Or maybe not.
wow!! what an enchanting way of expressing the friendship between the two...loved it
Hi all, thanks for the kind words. To answer you knot2share ... I have written a haiku in Almost the same words on my other weblog on Basho. So it's possible that you've read that.
Knot2share you can find that post here:
http://bashorevisited.blogspot.nl/2011/12/basho-revisited-midday-nap.html
Enjoy the read.
I like the contrast of summer and cool wall ~ Your last about the blue butterfly is specially lovely ~
Lovely set, as usual
I love these two. Their attention to detail, even their playfulness . . . reminds me so much of Basho. Bravo!
Nice. The first sounds like a great way to pass a hot afternoon. I love naps.
a siesta - how inviting.....feeling lonely and being alone are 2 different things - the last one was sad....somehow nature eases the loneliness
Nicely done!
I humbly accept all your kind comments. They make me blush.
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