Inspired by the theme at
Day 28 of the September Heights is on ... it feels already a bit sad to know that this challenge is almost over, but ... well it's not yet over ... so let's go for today's prompt waltz.
courting swans
they move so gracefully
waltzing together
waltzing together
swaying over the dancefloor
with my wife
with my wife
swaying, so gracefully
like courting swans
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| Credits: courting swans |
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25 comments:
This is a wonderful sight :-)
How beautiful, bot your haiku and the swans. I love that you likened waltzing with your wife to courting swans. So romantic.
comparing your dance with your wife with the grace of swans - lovely relationship
Oh, birds have some of the best mating dances!
Haiku dancing to happiness. Your picture is gorgeous, too.
Such a beautiful poem and photo.
Oh, this is so lovely! I love the image you created of a happy couple! Well done!
Lovely - so romantic.
__I often say little about our minor acomplishments, but Kathy and I have danced... most of our 35years together. We have followed very closely the ISTD sylibus, and
we'd not change that for a moment.
__Your three haiku, and the grace of your "dancing" photo, say it all, so well!
-the swamp birch dances-
_m
The image looks enticing, Kris! How nice to be ever together with the dear wife!
Hank
This is really nice!:)
such grace and such poise in the pic and in your haiku as well..
great haiku, though I had to do a double take of the author!
I can imagine that it's confusing that I write under two different names Chèvrefeuille and Basho2012, but it's just because I loved to have a wordpress weblog. Chèvrefeuille I couldn't use on wordpress, so I chose Basho2012. Basho was one of the greatest classical haiku masters and he is my inspiration.
Real lovely
So lovely...very nice!
Beautiful haiku and wonderful rhythm.
Dance the dance of Nature. Beautiful.
Peace
Lovely set of haiku ~ love the visuals of the 'courting swans' ~ (A Creative Harbor)
What a beautiful set of haiku and a lovely mental image of a very happy couple waltzing together in life
Lovely! lovely! The courting swans mated for life and the married couple ... beautiful images.
It was a pleasure to write this haiku set. Thank you all for appreciating it.
Your wife must love it when you write so tenderly of your relationship with her.
Wilderness Waltz
love in every word.
thank you chevrefeuille for the beauty of swans and your cherishing heart.
Beautiful!
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