Saturday, November 19, 2016

Carpe Diem Winter Retreat 2016 Find The Silence #4 mesmerizing


Dear friends,

What a challenge this is ... an every day haiku or tanka themed "find the silence" and today I have tried to create another haiku. Maybe you know Santoka Taneda, he was a so called "free-style" haiku poet and he never used the 5-7-5 count or a kigo. I am a fan of his style so I thought I do a "free-style" haiku this time, or as I called it myself ... a haiku in the Kanshicho-style (in the way of the Chinese poem).

the waterfall
ah! that sound ...
mesmerizing


© Chèvrefeuille

See you ....

3 comments:

Hélène Vaillant said...

What a beautiful imagery for a waterfall.

rhymeswithbug.com said...

Such a peaceful feeling

vijita pillai said...

That's beautiful :)