Showing posts with label Willow. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Willow. Show all posts

Thursday, January 19, 2012

Sensational Haiku Wednesday on "silhouette"

Join the fun!


Also published for: The Purple Tree House, back to basic

Hello to you all. Another Sensational Haiku Wednesday. This week's prompt is "silhouette", must be an easy one I think. Let's go do it and join the fun of writing haiku.

boy's silhouette
on the white mansion wall 
between sunflowers


under the willow
on the city's graveyard
weeping silhouette




playing with the sun
the shadows of my children
on the white wall

I have tried to write these haiku in the classical form of 5-7-5 syllables, not so easy as I thought, because I write my haiku mostly in the Kanshicho-style. In this style the syllable count is different.

Well ... until next week :)

Saturday, January 7, 2012

FIRST TIME WITH LAUGHTER


For The Purple Treehouse haiku with a smile :)

This is the first time I will try to write some haiku/senryu with a smile or humour. Haiku and Senryu were always in the classical Japanese literature based on humour. So I have to try this. It will not be easy for me, because I am not such a guy with jokes and humour. I am a serious guy when it's about haiku (my passion), but ... well I never have run away for a challenge ... so let's go.

First I would like to give a haiku by Basho in which I think you can see humour:

ought one laugh or cry
when my Morning Glory
withers up


Credits: Morning Glory

Two by myself:

laugh at me
when I put my glasses on
I am an old man



such a hot day
my shadow needs to cool down
under the willow




Well ... I hope you did laugh :)

Sincerely,