Saturday, January 28, 2012

Haiku Heights "Crimson"

This weeks prompt "crimson" is (again) a tough one. What can I do with this prompt? Well I have to try of course so here I ga:

the day has gone
crimson clouds touching
the wild waves

highlighted crimson
the raspberry in my garden
late summer

ah! that color
the deepest red I ever saw
her new robe

in the frontyard
the young roses blooming
the deepest red


Sincerely,

10 comments:

anthonynorth said...

Many different perspectives of crimson. Nicely done.

Susie Clevenger said...

I love your take on crimson..I especially like the first one.

Karen said...

A terrific series of haiku. I really like the first one.

Leo said...

I like that first, very much so.. Could see the clouds moving past the ocean at sunset! :)

Amber said...

Each one stirred up vivid images in my mind. Nicely written! :)

the critics said...

i liked the first too .nice

here is mine[

http://thealchemycritics.blogspot.com/2012/01/lifes-simple-realities-crimson.html

Taylor Boomer said...

very sharp story telling.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Now that I've caught a glimpse of that succulent raspberry in your garden, I think I'll have a bite!


Boy in Crimson

beccagivens said...

Another star set ~~ Beautiful!!

Sarah said...

I like the image of the second one in this series