the day has gone
crimson clouds touching
the wild waves
highlighted crimson
the raspberry in my garden
late summer
ah! that color
the deepest red I ever saw
her new robe
in the frontyard
the young roses blooming
the deepest red
Sincerely,
Saturday, January 28, 2012
Haiku Heights "Crimson"
the day has gone
crimson clouds touching
the wild waves
highlighted crimson
the raspberry in my garden
late summer
ah! that color
the deepest red I ever saw
her new robe
in the frontyard
the young roses blooming
the deepest red
Sincerely,
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10 comments:
Many different perspectives of crimson. Nicely done.
I love your take on crimson..I especially like the first one.
A terrific series of haiku. I really like the first one.
I like that first, very much so.. Could see the clouds moving past the ocean at sunset! :)
Each one stirred up vivid images in my mind. Nicely written! :)
i liked the first too .nice
here is mine[
http://thealchemycritics.blogspot.com/2012/01/lifes-simple-realities-crimson.html
very sharp story telling.
Now that I've caught a glimpse of that succulent raspberry in your garden, I think I'll have a bite!
Boy in Crimson
Another star set ~~ Beautiful!!
I like the image of the second one in this series
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