Thursday, February 9, 2012

The Haiku Challenge, day 9

Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 9 – February 9th – Theme: Paint the Image
Photo Clicked by Siva of: Siva's Art Work

Today another challenge to "re-paint" in words a wonderful photo by Siva A colorful photo with a lot of locks.

Siva's Artwork

unchain your heart
give your inner beauty 
like nature does

closing the gate
to become a real master -
cherry blossom falls




break the lock
look around, open your heart
be part of the world

Credits: Rusty Lock
rusty lock
easy to break
start living


It wasn't easy to write these set of haiku. I think I painted the picture with words, but if they are really haiku? You may say, my dear visitors.

'till tomorrow

18 comments:

Amber said...

I love the first and the last one!
They are really good! :)

Inspiring Always said...

Yes, your words have painted the picture. Nice ones!

By the way, let me guide you on how to change the settings for the comments so that friends from wordpress can also post their comments.

1. Go to your Blogger Dashboard.

2. Click "Settings"

3. Click "Post and Comments"

4. Under "Comments" you will see the question "Who can comment"

5. You can either click "Anyone" which includes anonymous or "Registered Users" - click on your choice. (For me I click on "Anyone" as I have the choice whether to publish anybody's comments, in case it is spam!)

6. Under "Comment Moderation" you can click "Always" if you want to have the choice to check the comments before they appear on your blog.

7. Click "Save Settings" - the orange coloured tab on the right hand side of the page.

I hope this helps. Sorry, it's so long, taking up a lot of your blog space! He he! :)

Asni
http://awalkinmyheart.wordpress.com/

Chèvrefeuille said...

Hi Asni, thank you so much. I have re-arranged the settings of my blog with your help.

Namaste

Grace said...

Very nice set...I like to break that rusty lock and start living ~

Cressida de Nova said...

I like the first and the last one also.

Pranali Kadam said...

First and third,paints the picture vividly :)

br!nDle said...

Loved it...:)

Simran said...

Amazed to see how uniquely you expressed and left me wondering! :)

Karen said...

A great set. The first one speaks to me, a chained heart has little to give.

Magyar said...

For me? Its the rusted locks, and its adjacent verse.

__I've not reached a level that will allow me judge someone elses chosen form.

"The old saying"

Learn the rules; know the rules; follow the rules; break the rules.
(and take your chances)

Good work, here. _m

becca givens said...

What a delightful set ... for being what you refer to as difficult - you make it look easy and created several variations of the theme. Nicely done! Thank you for sharing. :-)

(BTW - thank you for the setting change for comments!)

The Noiseless Cuckooclock said...

great sets of haiku,

Thanks for allowing pop up commenting,

otherwise, could not make it,

Abby said...

I like the one about the rusty lock! Nice!

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Frankly, I like the idea of breaking locks, rather than hunting around for a key to open them!

Paint This Image in Your Heart

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Yeah! Nice work!!

Chèvrefeuille said...

It's always a pleasure to read the comments of my visitors. They make me proud, but also very humble. Why is this happening to me?

croaking frogs
the scent of the old pond
in the evening

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Awesome Haiku...I'm new to this haiku format actually....You all are my inspiration...thank you :)

Someone is Special said...

Awe, I loved this look of your blog.. A great set of haiku particularly your first one is too good..

Someone is Special