Saturday, February 11, 2012

Naisaiku, scattered silence

Jamaican Lizard Cuckoo
On my poetry blog I have published a few Naisaiku and ... well I have to say it's a wonderful manner to write haiku. So I thought "I have to publish a Naisaiku on my haiku-blog". This one is made from an older haiku I have written a few years ago.

cry of a cuckoo
breaks through the early day -
scattered silence
scattered silence
scattered silence
breaks through the early day -
cry of a cuckoo




Sincerely,

2 comments:

vivinfrance said...

This cleverly reflects the repetitive nature of the cuckoo's call.

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

That was running deep....Loved it...