Day 11 in our Haiku Heights April Challenge. Not an easy one for today ... possible ... a tough one I think. So I have searched for synonyms for possible and came up with the following series of synonyms: available, breeze (in the non-formal way), desirable, hopeful and promising. So for today I will try to use these in my contribution to the Haiku Heights April Challenge.
promising dreams
in the midst of the summerher first born child
her first born child
lies in her arms sobbing
hopeful new day
hopeful new day
available in yellowish
a great sunflower
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| Credits: Van Gogh Sunflowers |
a great sunflower
desirable to bright sunlight
bows his head to earth
desirable to bright sunlight
bows his head to earth
bows his head to earth
a possible new flower opens
promising dreams
a possible new flower opens
promising dreams
Well ... not entirly what I would like it to be, but ... this is a experiment ... painting with words without saying something ... No not a great contribution I think.
9 comments:
Beautiful composition, last lines are awesome...it's pictorial.
It's interesting and very challenging to use synonyms! Well done! I like sunflowers, especially Van Gogh's ones!!!
I like this haiku very much. I do think of a child's birth as being a new promise for all of us. A continuation, a hope. Thank you.
Beautifully composed Chev :)
The sobbing child got to me... Sunflowers are a happier image.
Lovely...my first born was born in summer, so your post resonated with me. I like the hopeful new day ~
Excellent...enjoyed your haiku, the flow. The sobbing child, touched my heart. Well, written.
Peace,
Siggi in Downeast Maine
just lovely..
possibilities has so much potential in them
I liked the way your haikus are linked :)
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