Wednesday, April 11, 2012

Haiku Heights April Challenge, day 11 "possible"

Day 11 in our Haiku Heights April Challenge. Not an easy one for today ... possible ... a tough one I think. So I have searched for synonyms for possible and came up with the following series of synonyms: available, breeze (in the non-formal way), desirable, hopeful and promising. So for today I will try to use these in my contribution to the Haiku Heights April Challenge.

promising dreams
in the midst of the summer
her first born child

her first born child
lies in her arms sobbing
hopeful new day

hopeful new day
available in yellowish
a great sunflower

Credits: Van Gogh Sunflowers
a great sunflower
desirable to bright sunlight
bows his head to earth

bows his head to earth
a possible new flower opens
promising dreams

Well ... not entirly what I would like it to be, but ... this is a experiment ... painting with words without saying something ... No not a great contribution I think.


Mohini Puranik said...

Beautiful composition, last lines are's pictorial.

Diana Teneva said...

It's interesting and very challenging to use synonyms! Well done! I like sunflowers, especially Van Gogh's ones!!!

Ellecee said...

I like this haiku very much. I do think of a child's birth as being a new promise for all of us. A continuation, a hope. Thank you.

Sri Valli said...

Beautifully composed Chev :)

PattiKen said...

The sobbing child got to me... Sunflowers are a happier image.

Grace said... first born was born in summer, so your post resonated with me. I like the hopeful new day ~

Siggi in Downeast Maine said...

Excellent...enjoyed your haiku, the flow. The sobbing child, touched my heart. Well, written.
Siggi in Downeast Maine

Jyoti Mishra said...

just lovely..
possibilities has so much potential in them

Pratibha said...

I liked the way your haikus are linked :)