I am in the nightshift so on this day 15 I will also write the contributions for day 13 (warmth) and 14 (aura) .But nevertheless I don't quit of course. The prompt for today is alive and that's an understandable word for me. So this day I could write a bit relaxed and easy. Well ... it wasn't easy, but a lot easier as e.g. coherent as we had on April 12th.
April 13th: Warmth
compassionate
smiling Buddha on His way
to enlightenment
to enlightenment
I hope I will succeed
through writing haiku
smiling Buddha on His way
to enlightenment
to enlightenment
I hope I will succeed
through writing haiku
through writing haiku
I can feel the warmth of nature
deep within me
deep within me
writing haiku for the world
compassionate
April 14th: Aura
circle of light
around all nature
strong energy field
strong energy field
I can feel her strenght struggling
for her life
for her life
still good memories of youth
her heart cries
her heart cries
only child parted from her
dying all alone
dying all alone
with a smile on her face
circle of light
April 15th: Alive
cherry trees blossoming
nature is coming to life
in bright sunlight
in bright sunlight
the sunflowers look like real suns
what a sight!
what a sight
waves rolling over each other
breaking on the beach
breaking on the beach
a sailing ship stranded
in the spring storm
in the spring storm
the fragile young flowers
cherry trees blossoming
Well it wasn't easy to write such a long series of haiku, but I have catched up. See you tomorrow.
6 comments:
A treat
I so cherish here
alive..
RS:)
I repeat Rameshji's words, wonderful treat....so beautiful, giving a pleasant feeling of spring blossom in the summer
Loved your take on all the three prompts.....thoroughly enjoyed reading them :)
Beautiful cascading haiku, Chev! A whole set to whet the appetite, Great write!
Hank
i hope you reach your enlightenment
alive on subway senryu
I enjoyed your "warmth" and "alive" haiku sequences.
Richard
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