Monday, April 2, 2012

Haiku Heights April Challenge, day 2 "deserted"


Day 2 of the Haiku Heights April Challenge. Today ... deserted. A word I know and maybe can use for a new haiku. Let's go ...

deserted desert
every where you look sand -
the trail of a desert snake

the trail of a desert snake
crafting a wonderful sand sculpture
towards the oasis

towards the oasis
finally found water and man
deserted desert

Credits: dessert snake (sidewinder)
See you tomorrow.




9 comments:

ArtMuseDog and Carol said...

well done ~ not a pleasant word to work with ~ huh? ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

Karen said...

Great cascading haiku. (might want to change dessert to desert)

Kristjaan Panneman said...

Hello Karen, sorry I spelled it wrong, english isn't my maiden language. I have changed it. Thank you for your kind remark. And bringing this to my attention.

zongrik said...

i like the middle one a lot!!

Cheryl said...

Fabulous and descriptive.

Ellecee said...

I really enjoyed this haiku. It fits perfectly with the picture of the snake. I can picture it slivering across the sand.

Grace said...

Very nice portrait of that deserted desert ~

Great to see you here ~

Sarah in Maine said...

I like the photo a lot and the haiku to go with it...
very nice.
Siggi in Downeast Maine, USA

⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...

Wow...This is a lovely story!...I loved your imagination :)