Tuesday, April 3, 2012

Haiku Heights April Challenge, day 3 harbor


Hello all,

Day 3 of Haiku Heights April Challenge. Until now I had no problem to write a haiku on the given prompts, but this one harbor isn't easy. But ... never say never ... so I tried and came up with the following haiku.

young dolphins
stranded in the city harbor
hear their sadness

hear their sadness
lost and alone in shallow waters
without their mother

without their mother
crying their lungs out
young dolphins

Portofino Harbor


Well .... see you all tomorrow.


11 comments:

ArtMuseDog and Carol said...

Lovely as usual ~ bit sad ~ very touching ~ thanks, namaste, Carol ^_^

Ellecee said...

I enjoyed your haiku for this day. Poor dolphins :-) I can feel their fear and sadness.

vivinfrance said...

lovely haiku chain, and picture, too.

Karen said...

Sad, but a lovely sequence.

Ramesh Sood said...

Emotions crafted so well..

Geraldine said...

sad but beautiful.

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Grace said...

Very beautiful images...your use of the dolphins is excellent ~

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

For any creature to be stranded where it doesn't belong is sad...

Harbor No Ill Will

Cheryl said...

Soft spoken words for life.

Sarah in Maine said...

Breath taking words
cut to the soul...
sad, poor dolphins...
touching.
Peace
Siggi in Downeast Maine, USA

beccagivens said...

Tugging at my heart strings ~~ sad cascading Haiku!! Thank you for sharing!

This is my Day 3 ~~ Harbor.