Day 2 of the Haiku Heights April Challenge. Today ... deserted. A word I know and maybe can use for a new haiku. Let's go ...
deserted desert
every where you look sand -
the trail of a desert snake
the trail of a desert snake
crafting a wonderful sand sculpture
towards the oasis
towards the oasis
finally found water and man
deserted desert
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| Credits: dessert snake (sidewinder) |
See you tomorrow.
9 comments:
well done ~ not a pleasant word to work with ~ huh? ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
Great cascading haiku. (might want to change dessert to desert)
Hello Karen, sorry I spelled it wrong, english isn't my maiden language. I have changed it. Thank you for your kind remark. And bringing this to my attention.
i like the middle one a lot!!
Fabulous and descriptive.
I really enjoyed this haiku. It fits perfectly with the picture of the snake. I can picture it slivering across the sand.
Very nice portrait of that deserted desert ~
Great to see you here ~
I like the photo a lot and the haiku to go with it...
very nice.
Siggi in Downeast Maine, USA
Wow...This is a lovely story!...I loved your imagination :)
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