Inspired by the theme at
Today's prompt is Rain a wonderful prompt, because we are entering autumn and in that season rain falls are very common and often accompanied by thunderstorms and strong winds. At least ... in my country.
autumn has come
every day heavy rain falls
leaves tolling around
leaves tolling around
covering the streets and gardens
their sweet perfume
their sweet perfume
of dead and decomposing
autumn has come
See you all tomorrow.
19 comments:
I love your description of the 'sweet perfume'...
Love how you contrasted sweet perfume with death and decomposition, though fallen leaves do have that nice smell. I really enjoyed this.
Wonderful image '''leaves tolling around! I like it!
I love the first, and though the cascade works seamlessly, I feel the first stands on its own! :) Beautiful.
I enjoyed your cascading haiku and the picture of autumn that it brings to me. Scent, sound, and sight :-)
Sweet and decay - wonderful juxtapositon!
Wonderful juxtaposition of words- sweet and decay
One could get carried watching leaves blown around by wind and rain. I love the first one. You 'got me on the sweet perfume.'
I love the smells of Autumn. Your haiku in praise ticked my box!
autumn has turned to my favorite season already and this is a lovely haiku picture of it.
you have created such a beautiful imagery through the complete set of haiku...loved it
Well..a good cascading haiku..makes me happy..
RS:)
lovely
I love how is cascades like rain itself, beautifully captured imagery.
The rain changes things, for sure!
Seven Rains
Words used are amazing...
Sweet perfume...
http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/and-i-fell-in-love.html
Wow...I love that sweet perfume....I can visualize the imagery through your words...
These are beautiful. I am certainly looking forward to fall.
I particularly like the middle Haiku ... Autumn is my favorite time!!
September Heights - Skies' Joy
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