Inspired by the theme at
Glory is the prompt for today's September Heights (thank you Jaideep). Another great prompt ... maybe I will write a sequel on the one of yesterday.
his eyes went dark
a journey to heaven started
brought new light
brought new light
in Gods heavenly home
the glory of life
the glory of life
cherry blossoms blooming
above his grave
above his grave
the skylark is glorifying
his Creator
his Creator
brought new life to the world
my nephew
my nephew
with his sparkling eyes
what a glory
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| God's Heavenly Home |
'Till next day.
21 comments:
Beautiful...I liked it..the way you have weaved it..
RS:)
The last one is especially beautiful, Kristjaan. Thank you for sharing such deeply felt emotions.
they are all nice, but I am leaning towards #3. Thank you for sharing your love, Kristjaan san!
Thank you dear visitors for the kind words you sprinkle on me. I loved writing this continuation on my post yesterday.
I feel blessed ... to do what I love to do. Caring for my patients and writing haiku.
Namaste
Life and death so nicely connected in your haiky.
I especially like the image of the skylark glorifying the Creator.
Kristjaan, may He bless your nephew and thanks for sharing your emotions.
Thank you so much for sharing these beautiful thoughts with us.
I really love this. I like how it goes from heaven, to the grave and blossoms, to a baby. Wonderful.
Poignant haiku. I like the lines - cherry blossom blooming
above his grave
and the skylark....
Full of emotions. Thanks for sharing. :-)
really liking your write today, your liking of the circle of things is very good
the flow of your words is so smooth..loved reading it...
I love all the images here, beautifully depicted:D
Life and death wonderfully portrayed. I love the picture I saw while reading your lines. 'Skylark is glorifying his Creator' is a fave.
Very beautiful and touching haiku Kristjaan!
Many layers of the meaning -- "new light" ... out of death -- a glorious birth. Nicely woven!!
September Heights - Sings Sun's Glory
great tribute!
Two Glories: Litter and Flower
A fine weave.
Poignant images.
I like the series.
A glory-ful chain. Lovely.
love the word flow.
Truly wonderful!
This series is dedicated to my brother R.I.P.
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